Black Poetry : Gentle days

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  1. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smile life get's better//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
     
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    clearly
    I am in my gentle days
    friends stop by as we chat awhile
    without the need of voices boastful
    and loud
    just shining as the sun slowly goes down
    as my gentle days still hang around
    reading your words as I chuckle now and again
    thanking Jesus for the rays that shine within
    My window, My sight, my life
    as I send you my shine to embrace your way
    cause all should have a calm, quiet gentle day


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    that was beautiful poetrymama....i liked that alot....it gave me this serene feelin for a moment... but the gunshots outside drowned that out...thank u for 20 seconds of bliss...it was beautiful.....
     
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    Thanks, Lurk. This is how my day is going and I am grateful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    such warmth and sweet days ahead
    this took me to my quiet place .......
     
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    Rich, thank you for commenting on my Poem of how my day was going. Warm sunny days just inspire me to write.
     
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    Your spirit soars in your poetry!
     
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    Thanks for commenting on this poem. I am at one with myself. :bellydance:
     
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    This is a place & time that so many of us are aware can exist...

    Happy u've got yours.

    Nice write.

    Peace.
     
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    Positive, thanks for commenting on my life.
     
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    i had to read this agian.......i love this.......give me more....!
     
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