Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetrymama, May 9, 2005.
Smile life get's better//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I am in my gentle days
friends stop by as we chat awhile
without the need of voices boastful
just shining as the sun slowly goes down
as my gentle days still hang around
reading your words as I chuckle now and again
thanking Jesus for the rays that shine within
My window, My sight, my life
as I send you my shine to embrace your way
cause all should have a calm, quiet gentle day
that was beautiful poetrymama....i liked that alot....it gave me this serene feelin for a moment... but the gunshots outside drowned that out...thank u for 20 seconds of bliss...it was beautiful.....
Thanks, Lurk. This is how my day is going and I am grateful.
such warmth and sweet days ahead
this took me to my quiet place .......
Rich, thank you for commenting on my Poem of how my day was going. Warm sunny days just inspire me to write.
Your spirit soars in your poetry!
Thanks for commenting on this poem. I am at one with myself.
This is a place & time that so many of us are aware can exist...
Happy u've got yours.
Positive, thanks for commenting on my life.
i had to read this agian.......i love this.......give me more....!
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