Black Poetry : Genesis (A LiLi & Reason Collabo)

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  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Completion of my sphere
    Memorial for chapters buried
    Evidence of a new Genesis
    Metamorphosis of something beautiful
    As if you weren’t already enuff
    Like a chameleon meshing to my essence
    You’re happening extra-ordinarily
    Healing my past
    Fulfilling my poetry’s prophecy
    Presently a~muse~ing me
    You are phenomenal
    Quite an impressive reflection of love
    And I can’t help but to be elated
    That you are my ‘Right now’
    My intent?
    To be your metaphor 4 love
    Custom fit to your being
    Accent your femininity
    2 unlike the chameleon make it
    Evident that I am the completion of your
    Sphere~

    If destiny is truly infinity
    than this course towards completion
    Must be paved with anomalies
    Only found in dreams
    And
    As in Genesis
    Beginnings never become ends
    But building ultimate to perfection
    The stars have aligned
    And the harvest moon has
    Shone down and revealed
    The sacred path
    As proof that chapters in your book
    Have included me between the lines
    ..always...
    You have been guided to your butterfly
    I have merely been cocooned
    And
    In wait of your ready
    For your eyes to open and glimpse me
    within the trees
    Your acceptance of my colors
    Welcomes you to gaze into the looking glass
    of my sphere
    And if you choose to bound...
    ...simply glide in
    The correlation of your intent
    and
    My past needs to invent allowed open your
    "Right now"
    And so if it's love that you truly see
    Then voiced concurrence need not come from me
    Know that your fit is molded like
    Man hands to female thighs
    In an embrace of more than a metaphor
    but of extra-ordinary completion....


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  2. elayne.

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    lili. & brickhead.


    mmmhmmm! this was off the chain serene &
    just plain ole extratyght. you 2 work very well
    together... this is evident!!

    i loved this heah lines:
    "You’re happening extra-ordinarily
    Healing my past
    Fulfilling my poetry’s prophecy
    Presently a~muse~ing me
    "

    itsallLove, chirens.

    elayne.
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lili and Reason sittin in da tree. Just kiddin ya'll. Lili, much luv 4 ya girl.

    Reason, take care of my sista now.


    Aaliyahmonet:)
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yall 2 much!

    Elayne~ why you alwayz gotta call me out muh name?!? lol You know we do what we can... lol Know that your words mean a lot.

    Aaliyah~ Stop Dat!!! lol...Thank you so much for taking the time!

    I gotz love fa yall!
    Reas
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice comin' from tha both of you. i'm lovin' it real strong!
     
  6. LiLi

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    Hello fellow lovers of the scribe!!

    ms. elayne.~your appreciation is graciously accepted!! thank you for yo peep!

    Hey...mysistasistanotonlyinskinandsoulbutalsoinname~ your silly!!! thanks for checkin this sunshine!

    LISTERSCRIBIN'~ you lovin it strong!! than it must be right on, right on lol thanks hun!
     
  7. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for stoppin in!!
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo this is one phat collab
    and how did this get past me?

    DSS
     
  9. GQ

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    This was like that you two!!!!

    Awesome, awesome read!!!!

    :peace: & :heart:
    GQ
     
  10. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    supa so'ja~where you been?? lol glad that ya like it! my suggestion..check out page 2...

    Mr. GQ~well thank you, thank you!! peace & love...
     
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