Black Poetry : Generational Girl

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She’s a generational girl…
    woman trying to raise a woman
    producing only a generational girl
    for the girl of 30
    has a grandchild in this world
    at 13 the girl became a mother
    at 30 the girl became a grandmother
    so repetitively girl
    begat girl
    begat girl
    to this generational world
    of psychotic social ill
    low self-esteem?
    no self-esteem!
    for there is not woman in the mix.
    only girls
    begetting girls
    begetting girls
    begetting girls
    and no woman is to be found.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, this happens all too often. I like the way you brought this, the endless cycle rhythm, which is exactly how it is.
     
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    I agree with you 1000% cause i honestly know people like this. and the sad thing is that the mother still wants to be a kid..........hot
     
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    ((Kaboom)) Klabarron' Consciousness Party!!!
     
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    :lol: Grandmomz at 30...

    only education/information can thwart these patterns...

    much needed
    jh.
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The truth..I have felt that ..its amazing almost..how you see that repetitive cycle of reproduction at certain ages among young mothers. Keep speakin the truth..the truth shall set you free
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this is fully on hit. Strikin a nerve with me, and I'm so glad you brought this. Nice work.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh wise one...

    you shed light on a subject...
    that needs much light shed on it...
    I've watched this cycle with my own eyes

    a sobering reality...

    Excellent peace!
     
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    Short and poignantly POWER packed my brotha smh
    will the circle EVA be unbroken smh
    props my brotha
     
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    Nice Poem and Triniti was up wit da collab?
     
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