Black Poetry : gemstones

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  1. emrod89

    emrod89 Active Member MEMBER

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    pearl of love from friendship's bed
    glows intensely, ruby red
    jasper joys form speckled mirth
    give buried laughters lapis birth
    sapphire subtleties alter the shades
    create amethyst questions in faceted blades
    drop onyx detours, darkening views
    fragmenting passions to opaline hues
    garnet emotions not yet faded
    loving you has left me jaded
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very well pose'd poet
    this here open my mental play up
    you have scribe a masterpiece..
     
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    Very deep! Feelin' this definately! It's hittin' the mind and heart for sure. Nice.
     
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    This was so vividly vibrant and emotionally captivating,
    each gem representing the levels of feelings and state of beings

    not to mention your wonderful writing ability!

    loving this,
    Angelic
     
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    these jewels sparkled oh so brightly :)
     
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    thank you all for the positive feedback. it never fails to amaze me that i would get such a kind response from poets of your collective caliber. moved and blessed.

    Rich: that is high praise coming from you! thank you!

    Envy: i like to be able to get to both the heart and mind, thank you for letting me know that it had such an effect on you.

    sage: you are truly an angel. any love coming from the poet of the week is flattering indeed!

    triniti: thank you... glad to be able to add a glimmer of light. :)
     
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