Black Poetry : Gempis & $$RICH$$ collabo ( Da Feelin)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gempis
    Other people's feelings used
    to bleed into mines
    scary
    like being kidnapped into
    someone else , but !
    over time the necessary fence
    between me and everyone else
    grew stronger little by little
    under warn lights of voracious self love
    now made of cast iron, however
    the flowers of compassion
    grow through the cracks
    resilient they remain
    unsinged by the blaze of indifference
    unbeaten by the whip of nastiness
    unchushed by hands of hate

    $$RICH$$
    what is da feelin of the thoughts
    to da heart forever caught
    like waves it seep right in
    deeper , but i became stronger
    it see much longer beyond da myth
    with millions of glitch in the path
    but compassion continue right in
    under the walls of my beings
    for every moment savior
    indifferent two yet think same
    i hold no shame
    many before me has cast
    yet da whip is lashed out
    defeated blaze of nastiness
    da hate of whispers die
    together we fly high above
    untouched it remain
    dis the song i sang

    gempis..
    we see each other in this desert
    both a warm glow of light
    a world's worth of warm embrace
    the endless rivers of compassion
    windsweep through us each
    so glad you hear too
    and i feel for you ya child moved on
    but u still here given your welcome
    your kind words letting others know
    how u care
    making a difference by being there
    and you and i know this love isn't
    for show it is inside us and we are
    compelled to let it go
    we feel the humanity the frailty
    the commonality we know
    the pain that divides us is the
    same pain that binds
    i stand with you in this place
    always ready to throw down affirmation
    love & grace

    $$RICH$$
    out the coner stone of my heart
    u and i know our mission of love
    and the emotional embrace of us
    we both is the test of time we feel
    and know da love of rapture and
    know it's not for show
    but through da looking glass we rise
    da pain of life dewell from loss
    and the handz of time
    like pools of river red
    and ya every embrace make a different
    bring da warmth of hope & light
    humanity of it all is knowing u there
    ready to be my side mate
    compellingly some day we will let go
    but for now we hub in the orbs of da distance
    of starz and glow in da blink of an eye
    and know embracing is ours ............

    gempis & $$RICH$$
    Together we been down the path
    and we picture da storms
    on waves untouched this been a gempis & $$RICH$$ productional mass:)
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i LOVE this...wonderful work...
     
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beatifully written piece. The chemistry was amazing. You both feed off of each other well, i wish it didnt stop. Flow was flawless. And the imagery was on point. There was alot of lines i wanted to quote out, but i'll prolly end up quotin the whole piece.

    good job

    one luv
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we thank u from our hearts LovelyG by the way ya been a bad gurl.....lol i be watching u
     
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    Mind_$oul............Thankz we truely do our voices been around
    and we feed and flow & support each other gempis is very talented it was an honor working beside gempis

    The making of pt. II in coming soon !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...
    love da flow
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what do u mean i've been a bad girl rich????i demand an explanation...:)
     
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    thank u ....we was in a zone ......blkangel

    LovelyG .......ya flow been too smoove lovin it ya pen is badddd!
    u are one talented sistah
     
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    we pose this from the rapture of hearts and the emotions of self to join as one Da Feelin........Thank u all for the sweet reply's and
    gempis ur a gem
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to all who are feelin our work. Means a lot.

    $$RICH$$, you are a blessing.
     
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