Black Poetry : G'bye Letter

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Love,
    the wind has brought many things our way
    the breeze was hard to face sometimes
    its been great babygirl
    i still remember our early moments to our latest days
    i fell in love with ur voice the moment i heard u speak
    u gave me butterflies
    u gave me love
    and for that i cant be mad at you
    naw, i cant be mad at all
    ive cried with u, laughed with u, u even angered me
    u were the only one to get inside my heart and my brain
    being with u taught me so many things
    u brightened the light that god put in front of me
    u showed me how to show affection
    how to be real
    how to live life to the fullest but treasure the simple things
    you basically slowed me down
    but time changes things babygirl...
    you and i have transformed into two different people
    goin down two different paths
    even though i would love to take u with me, it wont work
    i would only stop you and you would slow me down
    i have faith in you and ur ability to fly pass the clouds
    to rise pass everyone that doubts u
    i know u feel the same...
    i dont need u to call me, i dont need u to send me letters
    naw, go on and keep the gifts
    just keep me in ur prayers and trust ill do the same
    cuz this is life babygirl and u gotta live it or its gonne live u
    i remember u tellin me there is no such thing as good luck only blessings
    so i wish many blessings on u and ur life
    i have officially spread my wings and now its time to fly
    i love you girl...
    poeticlyspeakin, ur always in my heart.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it out ........i feel u here ....we have to express it and let'em know time to move on and take flyte
     
  3. mz_agapeluv

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    ( heavy sigh) if only parting of ways was as nice as this LAWDDDDDDDyou got the flow going... I likes dis :)
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this girl....been through it a couple of times...
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree w/ mz_agape....

    This is the goodbye that we all long for...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    absolutely divine, i felt this one release?????!!!!!!!:toast:
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well thank u yall for understanding, reading, and replying. god bless...
     
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    man...this was too good...if love could only be that kind....
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u SwtT
     
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    This was the perfect display of strength, being able to recognize when it is time and appreciating the love that was...This was truly beautiful Poetic...feelin ya!
     
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