Black Poetry : gas too

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Mar 27, 2002.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl you done blown up
    The day after I said I DO to you
    You said I DO to every thing on the menu
    Got a ***** feelin set up

    I know what you thinking right know
    “you spose to love me for me”
    well
    who the hell is you
    the things we used to do
    you no longer want to do
    the places we used to go you no longer
    want to go
    the change in your body is simply the symptom
    of the change in your mind
    you just don’t give a **** no more
    you don’t care about me
    and you don’t care about you
    if you had revealed the real you before I said
    I DO to the you
    I thought I knew
    I could have made an informed choice
    But you set me up
    You know you never liked “walks in the rain”
    You done set me up and now I’M the bad guy
    Cus I don’t like the “real you”
    Don’t blame me
    Hell ! I never knew

    THE RULE IS
    After the third date you spose to
    Keep it real
    Why you think I farted in the car with the windows up
    on the fourth date
    “just keeping it real”
    now you the one farting under the blankets

    before we got married
    I thought you was gasss free
    Or at least unleaded
    But you just as stinky as me
    But it’s my own **** fault
    “she get it from her moma”
    and I know her moma got gasss too
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte Flow!

    Man that last line got me trip'n!!:lol:
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz,

    Crazy mad flowin'...I feel ya dawg!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are silly!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya breaking my funny bone .............tyght scribe poet!!
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you i'm gonna post my LOVE AND WAR in relationship again man
    this is the prelude or the sequel cause this real
    especially the fart part dunn

    FEELING YA MAAANN

    dssNY
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You made my day. That one hit close to home brethren. I really dug the way you brought out the male's side of dissapointment and the all to familiar title we acquire when we speak out against our women losing control of the fundamental attractiveness. I will tell you in a minute, I was tow' down when you met me but you done got tow' up!! So I hope some of these beautiful sisters retain a little sum'n from this piece cause a lot of us suffer from our hunnies feeling that they don't need to continue luring us in. We need dat' fa' sho!!
     
  8. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow shaz
     
  9. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am really honored that you poets enjoyed this peice, thank you for the read.
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SayWud!

    this is too much.
    I must say,
    there's some truth here. :laugh:
    Yet, I think it's only fair
    to moment, some men
    do the same. :D

    I enjoyed the read.
    Scribe On Poet!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart: