Black Poetry : Gardener

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by emrod89, Aug 4, 2003.

  1. emrod89

    emrod89 Active Member MEMBER

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    You came to my Today
    Wielding question mark bouquets,
    Causing me to re-examine Thens.
    With tiny seedlings of whatif and how,
    You've planted rows of maybe in my Now,
    Sprinkling long-established Nevers with perhaps.
    And here, when gentle breezes blow
    My garden's scents to my Tomorrow,
    I notice your if-only's blooming flower.
     
  2. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is it love which does such to your nows? Planting maybes and such...Thats a beutiful verse emrod89


    The Dreamer
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome ....dis was tyte flowin' u pose here
    let ya pen keep moving
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww... I liked this:)
     
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    Hi welocme to the family :wave:
    loving yor poem
    looking forward to reading more
    Peace
     
  6. emrod89

    emrod89 Active Member MEMBER

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    many thanks

    thank you all for your kind words. i was nervous about posting here, in the realm of so much talent!

    dreamer... it is love, and the possibility of someone/something one may never have considered before, that brings all these new varieties to the landscape of the garden. :)

    again, many thanks to you all (bluewater, swt, rich, and dreamer) for your feedback, your welcome, and your kind words. i look forward to participating in this exchange among minds.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love it, I love it ................I love it!

    What more can I say?

    Except.........I love it!

    I'll be looking for more of your work!
    Angelic
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was really sweet, i was feeling it...
     
  9. emrod89

    emrod89 Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks, sage and redlady. i am humbled by your responses.