Black Poetry : Ganster Love

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GANGSTER LOVE

    The Memory of her can’t be Faded
    It was at the Casablanca Casino
    Where I met the extravagant Daughter of Mr. Gambino
    Lovely Maria, a native daughter of Thugs
    Our common denominator was a blossomy of Hugs
    Sneaking away to a Cabin high up in the mountain skies
    Hopefully remaining invisible from the Wiseguys Eyes
    Love making all Night
    Keeping ourselves out of Sight
    As the Fire-Place was crackling the fresh pine Wood
    Her erotic body sensation felt so, so Good
    Yeah, yeah, yeah moans is what she Said
    While my fingers gently rubbed the hairs through her head
    You know you like bouncing Balls
    Crushing on your Clitoric Walls
    Sleep
    Sleep

    Awakened by my barking Pit Bulls
    Who could it be but the Main man with Pull

    Obviously Hit-Men picked up on our Love Trail
    But killing me off tonight I determined would Fail
    Beneath our hidden underground Wine cellar
    Leads to a Lake with an Amphibian boat/Car
    I almost didn't Escape
    I almost died for bouncing Grapes
    Love can sometimes be miraculously Fun
    Even if its puts your life on the Run
    Now I know R. Kelly’s Mr. Big
    And the work of Haters attempting six-feet Digs
    Oh no, no, No
    Mr. Gambino
    You’re not going to kill me today
    I live to kiss your daughter again Someday
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was refreshing, a tale of living on the edge, and living to do it all again. I really liked the detail in this drop.
     
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    yo...tyte poetic story man...
    i enjoyed your creativity...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TYTE SCRIPT DIGGEN THE WAY YOU POSED THIS PEICE
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece had great imagery and creativity
    it reminded me of a short story,the beginning
    of a great short story...I'd love to see how
    this would evolve, you should consider continuing
    it in the short story forum

    Great Read!
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very nicely done i love it
     
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    this was a poetic tale loved it......
     
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