Black Poetry : GAME TYME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Jan 17, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    today is just like each day
    I'll say
    same as the last
    doin things my way

    I wake
    and I pray
    show respect to life
    on the road to
    perfection
    gonna get this right

    acknowledge hurt..
    I know it's there
    but I already gave
    my fair share of
    tears

    what more can i give..

    my blood
    my sweat

    how bout the fight in me?
    cause I still got some left

    Pit stop in this race
    to rebuild and refuel
    can't stop me now
    the controls is on cruise

    the speed is intense
    forward moving yet nostalgic

    like a light year
    what you see from the past, a blessin from a-far
    I pray'd to heavens
    and wish'd on a star

    For strength... to do this on my own
    For mercy.......that I won't feel alone

    Isolation within frustration
    learned myself this defense

    but it's time for the score
    gotta play a lil offense..

    And it's run and it's gun
    cause my style is raw
    when I knock if it don't open
    mayne, i'll kick down the door

    all my life been taught how
    to read, write and act
    write me off.. cause they know
    I'm gonna fight back

    keep it moving in an
    orderly fashion
    but ain't nothing ordinary
    so my conduct a disorderly reaction

    some call it fury
    some call it passion

    but for every action

    there is

    a re-action.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's right...

    We ain't goin' out like no crash test dummy ~ GREAT SCORE!
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss Lady...you sure know how to put thoughts and feelings down in a way that is not only understood but REAL!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff on da right path here ...love this flow and the way u displayed it.
     
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    Bless Queen,

    I'm loving the way that ended...........strong and heavy with a point

    for every action there a reaction INDEED!!!!

    :terrific:
     
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    Hey Miss Lady
    You have display a wonderful scribe
    That we all have to have the heart
    and the drive to keep it moving.
    The next day is a blessing
    It's another day to do it right
    Or get it right and learning every second
    Much Love Sis..very awesome flow
    Keep it coming

    Peace~N~Love
     
  7. phynxofkemet

    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a strong mind indeed

    wow! the word that comes to mind is DETERMINATION - this is fresh like a glass of cool OJ to get ya started in the morning
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like you're going to keep it moving, come what may. Strength in your words poet.
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

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    um

    this was very though provoking

    very entranced into the spirit

    peace poet
     
  10. Desert Storm

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    Mayne!

    Mayne! Like ya teared it up in here! Sister Miss Lady! Tell tha truf now! I loved the way you came out on top in the end. Though you wounded you getting back in the ring! Feeling dis one right hea!
    Flow head girlfriend!
    This one encouraged me!
    (lacing up ma combat boots and doing the camaflouge!)
    hey, now! hee,hee,hee...
    Truely felt this, awesome poet!:em0800:
    Desert Storm
     
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