Black Poetry : Game Over...I Quit

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jul 14, 2005.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    After all I've stayed through, you gone do me like this?
    We'll surprise, surprise cause this time it's me YOU're gonna miss!
    I've got it together on my way to the top
    Boo-boo I think you're scared to make it, cause when ish gets good..you stop
    You choosin a path that leads no where but back
    And I can't take that road no more, it was nothing but whack
    So I guess what I'm saying is there are no when's, where's, or why's
    Because you made a double decision, so I'm saying goodbye

    No bullshi**in, no games, I'm not half-steppin it this time
    So since you're so confused, I'll make it easy and just take back what's mine
    My heart, my body, my soul and my mind
    And it's such a shame because a woman like me never again will you find
    So I guess that's it nothing too much else to say
    I've decided if it's that tough a decision it's not worth it to stay
    Because I'm not the one, this ish is no longer my role
    Take a step back and look, it's not only your child, but now your life that she's stole
    Cause I've become a woman in every sense of the word
    But she throws you a line, hook line and sinker, you're lured
    I wish you could've seen that you gave up a lot more than you know
    Cause for the years you were locked down I kept it real, love i was tryin to show

    She holds a wild card, you know what I mean
    But I've got a royal flush, Ace, King, Jack, 10 and I AM the d*mn queen
    Can't hold you here, but don't wanna push you away
    But I will no longer keep you where you don't want to stay
    So this is the end and I need you to know I loved you deep and true
    But now I have to love me enough to let go of you
    You'll see in time what we had was all you ever dreamed
    But all that had to change when you drafted baby mama back on the team
    I'm suppossed to be your MVP, first round draft pick
    But d*mn...enough is enough...Game OVER! I QUIT!!
    :getout: :getout: :getout:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we have to be traded to another team
    one that will comfort and care because the draft
    pick how dare ! we let go to move to new heights
    i feel u on dis one ...........................................
     
  3. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang this was tight. The way you wrote it, it could have been a rap too. I'm really liking this. Much props to you ma. :toast: Much props.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you just give your all, time and time again, sometimes you have to throw up your hands, and throw in the towel. You expressed this feeling right on point. Well written flow.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes enough is enough and only you can pull out...like the vibe

    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Game Over it just brings back them Atari days!
    You gone and tell like it iz!!!!
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gon ahead girl!!!!! Lol, I am too happy that your back. Your flow hasn't changed at all...it's still tight!!!
     
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    blessing master poet this is excellent.
     
  9. BrownEyed Girly

    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know this feeling so well. And it' crazy but you just have to know it is what it is, you're out of his league and that's what it is! Much love to you for this flow.
     
  10. Froggy1

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    good job keep up the good work
     
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