Black Poetry : GA...I felt the need to come back at ya with this...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Mar 21, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne's in the Mirror

    There she stands before me
    A true personification of self
    I am looking at me in the mirror
    It's my own reflection; still I'm sure
    it's hers as well - separate images but
    like minds-Sunshyne's in the mirror

    Feeling all the passion of her gentle rays
    of love reflecting from this mirror of life
    I cried the silent tears of joy that told
    the story of how we came to be

    We met one day through words of love
    Poet I and Poetess she
    Creating our divine passages and
    verses that show our true hearts

    Last night we listened to soulful instrumentals
    Those that breeze through one's essence; casual
    yet sincere in its' softness; complete in its'
    meaning-we spoke volumes through song

    I allowed her view of me from the mirror to cascade
    into my mind's reason; exposing my inner-kept
    but spoken thoughts-letting her into my life at
    that very moment-it felt right, true, and most of all safe

    She began to experience a little of me that few
    seldom conceptualize-fantasy with reality
    intermixed-a fantasy that tends to reveal so
    many beautiful secrets of me yet untold

    She muses that I am her muse-a title I cannot claim
    She's coyishly unaccepting of her true genius
    But her talented rays illuminate my darkest
    paths so that I may find my way to my own private
    realm of inner thoughts

    Looking into the mirror looking at the Sunshyne
    I envision a realness in her that ensures our connected
    flow is continuously worthy of being shared by
    us both-Sunshyne has warmed my soul and touched my heart
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ... seeee!! You're not playin' fair!!!

    you know how i feel about this piece!!
    & you just gonna use it against me
    like that?! Dayum!... nonetheless...
    EVERYTIME i read it i am both
    honored and humbled! thank you for writing it!

    Peace...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ man ya on target wit the shyne
    so devine and together again
    u better flow head!!
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <<<<< (sighing)... ahhhhh....

    just felt the need to read it again... & again... &...

    thanks GQ... you make me shyne...

    L&R...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Revisit of GA-Sunshyne...

    She's my gurl no doubt!!!

    :love:
    GQ
     
  6. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww!

    Ya'll bout to make me tear up!!!! This is so sweet!
    Them southern girls are sumthin else arent they! ;)
     
  7. alyce

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    feeling this....

    again....

    (and yes, Danilyn, "they" are) :wink:

    a
     
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    GQ,

    Very nice and enjoyable scribe.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Gee-Que.


    **** it!!... you just won't let me stop speakin'
    to you will you!!?? :lol:

    i love this piece!! & the number of times i've
    replied to it could be the dead give-a-way...
    or could it be because i inspired it?? :rolleyes:

    either way... it brings back very very fond
    memories... & i thank you for the journey today. (RT)
    but! be warned My Dear... 2 can play this game...
    & i go somethin' comin your way!
    umm hmm... dats right!! :D

    :heart:
    BlakGurl~
     
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