Black Short Stories : G Infamous but Unlike the rest

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  1. Negro Harmony

    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the streets was a black male 5'10,162 pounds, athletically built named Kabal standing idolly in the streets going to go see his girl Gena who he met not to long ago. Coming down the street was a black van carrying in it 10 men wearing black ski masks all armed. Suddenly it sped up towards Kabal. He turned around not knowing what to do, not expecting it.
    Slug that *****! the driver yelled.
    Kabal then turned around to run but it was too late. At least 15 bullets tore him down from his back to his legs. Unfortunately Kabal's girl Gena was also coming to see him and she witnessed the horror and screamed. More slugs fired.

    All the sudden Kabal woke up in a sweat from his nightmare.
    It was just a dream,he nervously told himself.
    It was already two in the afternoon as he woke up. All the sudden a hand grabbed Kabal by his shoulder from behind. Kabal turned around ready to swing but it was just his homie James.
    What the hell! Kabal said.
    Got ya shook up huh,James laughed.
    How the he** you get in here?! Kabal demanded.
    Same way I always get in here through the back door,James laughed.
    Kabal thought that was strange.
    Yo let me use yo phone,James said.
    Kabal knew what was coming he was about to call one of his many dime pieces. Kabal then threw him the phone.

    James dialed in the number to call his girl Tesha.
    Hello,Tesha answered.
    Whats up girl,James greeted.
    Hey James,Tesha said.
    Now this was a dime piece right here she was lightskinned, long brown hair, real curvy figure, and in the words of James she had a *** like whoah!
    What you doin? Tesha asked.
    Nothin but you wanna go to the movies later? James hurriedly asked.
    Alright,Tesha answered.
    Oh and bring one of your females friends for my ***** Kabal, James advised.
    Sure I got somebody, Tesha said.
    Alright bye,James said.
    Bye,Tesha replied.
    Kabal could hear every word on the phone.
    Don't be settin me up on no blind dates man! Kabal demanded.
    Chill just come wit us and meet her, James advised.
    Kabal didn't wanna do it because he was shy as he** but he gave into peer pressure.
    Fine,Kabal said not wanting to.
    Cool, James said.
    You might wanna change man, James suggested.
    Kabal took his advice and changed into a fresh blue T shirt, blue jeans, and some Jordans aka 20s as some call them.

    Later at 3:00 at movie theater

    Kabal and James arrived looking for their girls or soon to be. Kabal noticed that at this place was every hoodrat from here to the south was here obviously nothing better to do. James noticed his girl Tesha standing talking to the friend she brought for Kabal who was 5'9,125 pounds, light-brownskinned complexion, long jet black hair, athletic figure, her name was Gena.
    Ahh Tesha! James called.
    Tesha and Gena looked over across the crowd and saw James and Cabal and walked over to them.
    Hey baby, Tesha said to James.
    Hey Kabal, she said to Kabal.
    Whats up, both James and Kabal said.
    Kabal then noticed Gena looking at him and he looked the other way shy as usual.
    Gena this is Kabal, Kabal this is Gena, Tesha interduced holding back laughs.
    Hi Kabal, Gena said with enthusiasm.
    Whats up, Kabal said trying to sound suave.
    We gonna go buy our tickets, Tesha said.
    Tesha and her friends walked the other way to do so. As Tesha walked away James smacked her in her ***. She laughed as she walked off. Kabal couldn't help but notice Gena's butt jiggling beneath her skin tight jeans.
    Yeah i bet you glad yo *** came now,James laughed.
    They too went to get they're tickets.

    Five minutes later in movie theater they had went in to see 50 Cent Get Rich or Die Tryin

    James was sitting next to Tesha and Kabal sat next to Gena.
    Kabal didn't know what to say to her but tried to act as if he were doing something.
    Want some popcorn, Kabal asked Gena.
    Sure thanks, Gena replied.
    No prob, Kabal said.
    By the way Kabal I like that name Kabal, Gena giggled.
    Thanks my mother did too, Kabal replied.
    Gena and Kabal then began to giggle at each other.
    Sssshhh! the crowd said.
    F*** ya'll, Gena said under her breath.
    Kabal smiled at it.
    All of the sudden came a black dude with braids out of the rampway.
    Gena what the he** you doin wit this *****! the dude demanded.
    His name was Tayshawn.
    None of yo bussiness Tayshawn! Gena replied.
    She then got out her seat and walked to the lobby. Tayshawn went as well.

    Tayshawn came up behind Gena, she turned around.
    The fu** you want we over remember! Gena reminded.
    What nah nah! Tayshawn said.
    Yeah yeah! Gena replied angrily.
    No I luv u girl we belong togetha! Tayshawn said.
    What there is no we or us get it through you thick skull! Gena dissed.
    She then began to stomp off. Tayshawn didn't want it that way.
    Don't walk away from me! Tayshawn said as he grabbed her arm.
    She then kicked him in his shin. Tayshawn lost it and smacked the he** out of her and she fell the ground.
    Da**it, he uttered.
    Out of nowhere ran Kabal. He ran and stole Tayshawn in his face. He fell on his back as Kabal got on top of him.
    No Stopp!! Gena pleaded to Kabal.
    Kabal then stopped raining down blows on his face and got off.
    Tayshawn got up and wiped the blood from his face.
    This ain't over b****, Tayshawn warned as he walked off.
    Kabal then felt Gena's face.
    You ok, Kabal asked.
    Yes thank you, she said as she hugged him.

    To be continued
     
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    all snap this gonna get deep bruh man came to Gena aid
    but dude is coming back watch out for Tayshawn it ain't over

    pt.2 please getting deep and crazy now
     
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    thanks dogg
     
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    i like how this story begins flow on poet.:star:
     
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    I'm sorry, I was reading backwards. This was a good start right here though. Trouble was already predestined.
     
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    thank you I like to keep it suspensful lol
     
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    most welcome Harmony tyte joint
     
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