Black Short Stories : G Infamous but Unlike the rest 3

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  1. Negro Harmony

    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The three black males walked to the nearest Gas Station. In there they just happened to see their boy Malick. Malick was 5'6, skinny build, lightskinned with cornrows. When they saw Malick he gave each of them some dap.
    What ya'll doin here? Malick asked.
    I could ask you the same thing, James laughed.
    I gotta get my moms some cigarettes, George informed.
    Da** again! Malick chuckled.
    The people working at the gas station all kept eyeballing them as they walked by. Kabal wasn't suprised.
    Cracka a** muthaf*****, James mumbled.
    George then began sneakingly trying to put a cigarette pack in his pocket.
    Oh here we go again, Kabal thought to himself.
    Kabal knew he was gonna be runnin from the cops soon.
    Ya'll ready? James asked.
    They all nodded. They all began to walk out.
    Exscuse me sir, one of the employees said.
    Before she had the chance to accuse them of anything they all took off out the gas station.
    Hello police, the lady called on the phone.

    As they continued their running police cars were on their a**e*.
    Sh** the po-lice! George said.
    James then pulled out his 45 Magnum.
    No what the he** are you doin! Kabal cried.
    James let shots fire off at the policecar.
    We got a 187, 10-4, one of the police officers said into his walky talky.
    They all ran and cut a corner hopping over fences and all.
    Come on hurry!! Kabal cried.
    They hurriedly ran in Kabal's house and slammed the door and locked it.
    They were all exhausted, especially George due to all his weight and asthma.
    Kabal then went in his refrigerator and gave everybody some waterbottles personally they would've prefered coolade but weren't in the position to complain. Kabal looked out the window and were suprised to see the police had left.
    Thank God, he thought to himself.
    Kabal then helped George up to his feet.
    Da** I gotta get these cigarettes ta my moms, George said.
    They all walked out and headed to Georges house.
    George walked in.
    Boy why you so sweaty!? his mother said disgusted.
    George then handed her the cigarettes.
    Bought time ya did somethin right next thing you should do is lose weight, his mother said cruelly.


    Later at night at 12:00 a.m

    Kabal was just going home after saying bye to all his friends. Out of nowhere came somebody who put a gun to Kabals head and three other dudes stood with him. Kabal didn't know how to react.
    What now muthaf****! Tayshawn said.
    Kabal didn't say anything.
    I told you it ain't over b****! he yelled in his ear.
    Tayshawn then roughly turned Kabal around. Kabal looked at him with no fear.
    That made Tayshawn angry. He then pistolwhipped the he** out of Kabal. Kabal fell to the ground mouth bleeding. Tayshawn and his friends then began stomping Kabal on the ground. Tayshawn then raised his gun up and began pistolwhipping him again. Kabal let out screams of agony. They laughed at his pain.
    Look at this b****! one of Tayshawns friends laughed.
    STAY AWAY FROM GENA! Tayshawn warned.
    He and his crew then walked off laughin about what they had done.
    Kabal lay on the street a broken and defeated man. What doesn't kill him makes him stronger.


    To be continued
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :star: alright now feeling this plot
     
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    I like this right here. It was a smooth plot. I'm going to read the rest now.
     
  4. Negro Harmony

    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you its very much appreciated.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i see the plot is smoothly laid out !
     
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    I just started reading these stories and it kept me glued to the screen I can't wait to see what happens next
    I'm on my way to read the rest right now.
     
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