Black Short Stories : G Infamous but Unlike the rest 13

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  1. Negro Harmony

    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At the police station sat Kabal in a darkroom.
    Oh my god what the f**** goin on! Kabal thought to himself.
    Two white investigators then walked in. Their names were Detective Jones and Detective Wilder.
    So this is Kabal huh, Jones said.
    You know your goin down right, Wilder joked.
    Kabal didn't say a word.
    Silent type huh, Jones deducted.
    Look man i ain't done nothin, Kabal said.
    Ya sure about that, Jones tested.
    Yeah I'm sure, Kabal said.
    We got you down for involvement with a gasstation theft, a beligerent incident at the mall, and the shooting of Tayshawn Williams and three others.
    Like I said i ain't do nothin, Kabal replied.
    Wilder then lost it.
    STOP LYING!!! Wilder shouted as he put his finger in Kabals face and smacked Kabal in the back of his head.
    These racious mothaf****, Kabal thought to himself.
    Calm down he's not going anywhere, Jones said as he pulled out a bag of evidence.
    It was a bag with the weapon used in the shooting.
    Recognize these, Jones said.
    Sh**, Kabal thought to himself.

    Thirteen years later

    Kimo come on its time for school, Gena said to a boy.
    Out of the room walked a boy of 5'6, 140 pounds, black, looked just like Kabal.
    You ready? Gena asked.
    Yeah momma, Kimo answered.
    Ok bye sweetie, Gena said.
    Bye, Kimo said as he walked out the door.
    He walked out and walked up to two other boys named Tron and Brandon
    Whats good ni***, Kimo said.
    Chillin, Tron replied.
    What you got on my 40 homie? Kimo asked.
    I got the weed, Brandon said.
    Good good, Kimo said.
    Kimo then turned around and saw Kyle a ***** who fu**** with him the other day.
    There dat b**** ni***! Kimo said.
    He then pulled out his heat and pointed with the same dead or alive look Kabal had.

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    very nice u still making chapters this book should be hitting
    book stores .........
     
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    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks can you guess who Kimo is and where Kabal is?
     
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    look like Kabal been busted and Kimo is his son
    with the same fire as Kabal had 13 years ago.....

    it's like a mystery going on .
     
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    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah you right and it ain't over yet
     
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    bring it on so i can pick this mystery apart
    let me get my read on !!!!
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i aint lyin Rich, i wanna get my read on 2
    this story waz tyte and very interestin
    i shud put one of my stories on herr

    blackluv and bp
     
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    yeah ! Ghetto do that sis
     
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