Black Short Stories : G Infamous but Unlike the rest 11

Discussion in 'Short Stories - Authors - Writing' started by Negro Harmony, Dec 31, 2005.

  1. Negro Harmony

    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 22, 2005
    Messages:
    114
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    In a crib down south

    This place belongs to the Ryder Triplets. Donovan was the leader and brains behind them, Siege is the muscle of the group not too bright, and Troy he just don't care if it doesn't involve smoking weed or somebody else.
    Tayshawn got smoked by who!? Donovan demanded.
    Some ***** named Kabal they rushed up in his place and bounced him from what I heard, Troy answered.
    Wait'll I see him I'ma lay his *** out! Siege said to himself.
    Don't nobody fu** wit my ni**as like this and get away with it! Donovan said.


    Tomorrow at Kabals house
    Kabal and his friends were in his house lifting weights with Tesha, Gena, and Sarah talking with each on the couches. Tesha was still holding her head from the hit she took from Yolanda.
    You alright girl? Gena asked.
    Yeah I'm aiight, Tesha answered.
    Gena then put one of her mixtapes in the stereo. Brooke Valentines GirlFight started playing. Kabal laughed at it since there just happen to be a girlfight last night.
    Get your groove on! Sarah told George sounding preppy.
    Time for the harlem shake, George declared.
    Noo!!! everybody laughed.
    George then began doing the ugliest harlem shake Kabal had ever seen. His flab was jiggling everywhere which made everybody laugh.
    Sarah get up there and get crunk! Tesha said trying to get a few laughs.
    Sarah then got up and began trying to shake her *** on George. George was hysterical. Malick was cryin from the laughter.
    Yeah get crunk! Sarah said trying to sound black.

    They all then later went to the mall.
    You think I look good in this outfit? Sarah asked George showing him a blue tanktop.
    Yeah girl, George said.

    The Ryder triplets just happen to be in the mall to get some new shoes. They all the sudden noticed a person who fit Kabals description.
    There that ***** right there all crowded around them otha people, Troy said.
    Good we gon smoke this *****, Donovan declared.

    When George and Sarah began to walk to a bench out of nowhere came a white man.
    SARAH WHAT IS GOING ON HERE! The whiteman demanded.
    Daddy!! Sarah said scared.
    Whats going on!? George said sounding confused.
    Sarah is this what I think it is!? her daddy demanded.
    Uh uh, Sarah uttered.
    Exscuse sir but... George began.
    No one asked you Kunta Kentay! her daddy growled.
    Sarahs sisters then walked over.
    Sarah oh my god your going out with a black guy, Mary laughed.
    NO SHE IS NOT! her daddy yelled.
    Kabal then walked over.
    Whoah whats all the commotion? Kabal asked.
    Sarahs sisters then began to smile and giggle at Kabal. Kabal thought it was funny but didn't show it.
    Daddy let me explain! Sarah whined.
    NO NEED YOU WILL NOT BE HANGING AROUND THESE BLACK PEOPLE!! her daddy orderd.
    Daddy, Sarah began to cry.
    All of the sudden The Ryder Triplets ran out of nowhere and jumped on Kabal. George was about to help whe Troy pointed his gun at him.
    Go ahead try me *****! Troy dared.
    They were beating the heck out of Kabal.
    Thats right you show that black person! Sarahs daddy cheered.
    Shut up cracka! Troy said.
    He then shot Sarahs daddy in his arm and he fell.
    Ah God!! he cried.
    Sarahs sisters then took off running screaming HELP! Donovan then put his hand around Kabals throat.
    Yeah ***** you thought you could get away with what you did ta Tayshawn huh! Donovan taunted.
    The rest of Kabals friends showed up hearing of the commotion.
    KABAL! Gena cried.
    Malick then ran over to help Kabal but Siege was in his way and uppercutted Malick sending him flying like Deebo hit that dude in Friday. James then ran over and pulled out his 45 magnum and pointed it at them.
    Back the f*** up!! James warned.
    What *****! Troy dared.
    Kabal was caught between a rock and a hard place as Donovan had his gun in his face and Kabal was at his mercy.

    to be continued
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    this just get better every rip
    time to think about da book
    i want a sign copy ....continue on
    so i get my read on
     
  3. Negro Harmony

    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 22, 2005
    Messages:
    114
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    thanks dogg appreciate it
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    likewise you really know how to drop a full story line
    enjoying your creation .
     
  5. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    1,424
    Likes Received:
    12
    Occupation:
    student
    Location:
    da south............ATL
    Ratings:
    +12
    Dang, I want mo...........
     
Loading...