Black Poetry : Futuristically...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Jan 9, 2005.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Out of my desperation,
    Comes the inspiration,
    The realization,
    That there’s something in store,
    For me,
    Somewhere there’s more,
    For me to take a hold of.
    But then revelation…
    Took a hold of me.
    Conceived for the future,
    The love child of,
    My past and my present…
    I am.
    As the mystery unfolds,
    And verbalized are stories untold,
    Thus will I become complete,
    And this scribe will emulate
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    Aw yeah, pursue that fantastic being called YOU. Find out who she is and love her fully. Diggin this piece, Chastity. :dance3:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da grasp of self speaks out fully and complete
    tyte scribing wow!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anticipation of the future can bring forth the realization that self is emerging, and that is quite a revelation. Tight piece.
     
  5. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys for ur love....just a reminder to me that I'm somewhere in the future and I look much better than I look rite now :climb:
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww this was so wonderful...u have so much to look forward too...
     
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    it is such a journey to the place where we can realize ourselves and out potential. You have the ability to do anything, all you have to do is reach.

    Loved this poem, very inspiring :)