Black Poetry : fuSion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Apr 7, 2009.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Internal fusion
    Solidify expression, ink bleeds
    Solitary confinement, ink bleeds
    Oxygen driven machine, the galaxy is seen
    Universe spectrums away from sanity
    The world screams
    Day dreaming life spans into time
    Yet reality revolves around shifts
    Axis turning on hues and colors,
    Yet life is color blind, except the racist
    And so the child cries, silent woes, inside
    Unsure of inferno energy, symptoms
    Of hot flashes seen thru cold lenses,
    Looking at lifes difference. Challenges!
    The scene is the same as yesterday.
    Weather has yet to change, individually.
    And the ink seeps, staining externally.
    Forever time captured still isn't enough, caught.
    Veins rushed with traffic jams and explosions
    Intersected emotions, the sky is still blue today.
    Even after dreams of red light, life like, yellow fools growing hues, into clouded possibilities.
    Heaven is still true!
    Red bleeds through.
    Even after slit to perfection,
    Bandage over heart.
    Love slipped too.
    Tears still clear despite visions of lust rolling down my face.
    Leaving my space w the glance that remains.
    The grass still grows up.
    Greener than ever. And yesterday
    Still looks like today
    Before tomorrow arrives
    The world still rotates, right?
    The degree doesn't change.
    I bleed red. Yet inside
    Hues of blue. Hues of blue.
    Hues of blue.
    We are all alike.
    Internally.
    Before the slit, the split.
    The internal fusion.
    The ink bleeds.
    The ink bleeds
    the print is left
    Permanent!
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    excellent scribe....you pen has definitely grown over the years....

    one love
    khasm
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you are so correct we all are

    but you know what it is EVERYBODY'S "DIFFERENT" lol

    i give you MUCH LOVE ON THIS WORK

    these piece had such depth

    and i appreciate this part

    wow

     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    :terrific:


    The whole was great! But I liked this part, especially!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da depth this piece pose was well stated i loved it and how you express fusion
     
  6. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    understandin

    its beauty in understanding
    words fueld by other's liking
    post threads for comments and loving
    appreciate the kind words everyone
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The pen catches all the mundane, the exciting, and everything in between, leaking what it experiences as ink onto the page. I always enjoy your art poetess.
     
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