Black Poetry : Funny LOVE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Sep 8, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's funny when love is gone.
    Your caught in the middle of feeling foolish.
    Played like a fiddle.

    Did she do that to break my heart.

    Did he leave cause he's careless not smart.

    Blame me, I blame you.
    Neither guilty of the love they do.

    It was real.

    Red Hot for how long.
    No one knows the length and the strong.
    How long it will last.
    Stay with me never leave.

    Squeeze the love while you have it.

    Bags packed riding stead.

    Flying in and out of my life.

    Stay away.

    Love.

    I'm working on life.
    But without you I'm empty.
    I don't like the feeling.
    Of being with or being without you.
    They both scare me.
    I have experienced your ride.

    Smiling when you enter.

    I bet your laughing now.

    Funny Love.
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can tell just by your words you have a beautiful heart...this poem is such a reflection of that. both being without and being with it scare me too. it's like you want it, pray for it, beg for it, but then you get it and your like....dag, what do i do now. in short, i'm trying to say, i feel you. lol
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ho Dee ho ... How beau Tee full this is and treu..
    and i,m dont just respond because you just respond on me..
    i needed to read these words today........



    Love L
     
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    it beez like dat sometimes...
    keep da ink flowing
    with da emotions
    cause ya shine'n like
    diamonds
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee u say SO much with so few words...
    :)
    let it flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes this was well crafted in few wordz
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed reading nice flow
     
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