Black Poetry : Funny How

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Oct 1, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    Wow, seems just like yesterday
    you had so many bad words to say
    pushin' the grayest clouds
    over my sunny day....

    and i wrote letter of reconciliation
    only to receive brutal retaliation
    diggin my soul out
    like crabmeat , no doubt

    i told you, i love you , i care
    verbally and wrote it down
    on paper, but u never saiid
    u care, not a word

    Big shot, loud moufin me
    frontin in all with your friends
    "man she aint shat, tired of that"
    oh yah, vicious cycle never ends

    and i took it, cause i needed it
    cause i know how life goes
    say all the bad things u can
    cause karma has a stinch when it blows

    now u've come back here
    as tho i forgot all the bruises u gave
    to my ribs, and i smile
    cause u love me

    and now

    i don't love you.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    because now
    you are not the same
    you are MORE
    feeling you on this
    sistah
    Peace
     
  3. true love

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    very nice...i loved this and i'm really feeling it
     
  4. gempis

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    Right on, MORE, for the insight, and this is tight!
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin' this...
     
  6. MORE

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    thanks yall, i wasn't really feeling this one, kept gettin interuppted while i was writing but thanks!!!!:eek:
     
  7. triniti424

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    LOVE it especially the end...thas what he gets lol shooooo...he dont get no MORE holla lol :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin ya scribe and well done continue to express
     
  9. the_story

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    like triniti said that what he get actin all stupid, like he hard :rolleyes: *sigh* had a diamond in one hand
    but lost it, too bad for him, too good for u, cause its
    a new day!
    much love,:heart:
    -story:)
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

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    oh i like this
     
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