Black Poetry : Full House

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Miss_EducateU, Dec 5, 2002.

  1. Miss_EducateU

    Miss_EducateU Member MEMBER

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    In my house there's not enough space for cluttering
    your "access luggage is not welcomed
    In my house there is little ventilation
    so hell naw you can't air out your dirty laundry
    In my kitchen room there are no space savers
    to save my heart for you til you're ready
    So though there is a bathroom (with a toilet)
    there is nothing here that will recieve your ****
    In my house there's a place where only sleeping dogs lay
    In my house there's a welcome mat
    don't take it literally
    In my house there's peace, love, and tranquility
    although you took pieces of my love and left me tranquilized
    In my bedroom i have books of poetry and plays
    thats where your drama belongs
    In my cellar room i keep my memorandas
    maybe thats where i saw you last
    In my house I attempt to be maticulous so....
    thanks for stopping by.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz 4 da invite
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are very talented...keep hitting heads. 10

    blak
     
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    "Watch Out"

    "Yep" lady I like your style....

    I think I have found a new mentor and I can never get to many of them... Your awesome keep flowing

    :toast:
     
  5. Miss_EducateU

    Miss_EducateU Member MEMBER

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    Oh My....I can't thank you all for the praise!
    Queen, ditto, likewise, my sentiments exactly!
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words are so hard hitting..
    You could be the national spokeswoman for sisters.

    You got me checking myself.

    Peace.
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As Sheryka would say"It is polite to spit!"

    You spit volumes of truth with this piece and brought it on home with a stylish use of metaphors that create a strong image and affirmation for "Cleaning up yo house" and keeping it that way!
    Ha! I know the feeling and of whence you come with this flow...so she that knoweth , floweth!
    Blessings on Ya house!:shades:
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you posted it!!! i missed this one. thanks for
    bringing it from the archives! :spinstar:
     
  9. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    miss_e


    ...i am diggin' your style, chile!! :)

    thank you... once more... for flowin'
    among us.

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is what i like to see after a short hiatus...

    *reclinin' in your la-z-boy*

    nfinite....
     
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