Black Poetry : [email protected] valentine's day

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Valentine wishes is the last thing I need,
    Working 12 hours a days just to feed my seed
    Then with a speed that exceeds even gale force winds
    All my ends end up spent; on gitfs, candy and false print
    Pretending I’m content with this life that I’m leading
    When my hearts really bleeding from the beating it’s receiving
    Chocolate kisses and bubble gum wishes,
    Is just factious accounts of marketing brilliance
    Mindless minions spending billions and billions
    To express feelings that you might not even be feelin’
    I love you, I love you not; maybe or maybe not
    Like you, but not a lot, this madness has got to stop
    Trust me, I’m sick of this reciprocal fickleness
    It’s [email protected] ridiculous to even put up with it
    One day of love and the attention you been craving
    Now is it really amazing to see the divorce rate raising
    Just look at the equation and you do the math
    Been married a year and a half, and can’t remember the last time you laughed
    Or the last time he ran you a bath
    The path ain’t as clear as it was in the beginning
    When the love was new, and you couldn’t see an ending
    Then from some nerve-ending in the back of your mind
    You think to yourself, “Valentine’s day is my time to shine”
    So you put all your cream on the line, cause your love life’s in danger
    Shower her with gifts and cards with words from a stranger
    Pat yourself on the back, cause now you’re a hero
    But when the 15th comes around, that novelty is zero
    Cause its back to the job and the neglect that you’re used to
    Now you gotta put in overtime cause valentine juiced you
    See I don’t [email protected] with it, cause on the real, I don’t need to my girl gets my all everyday of the year through
    So when the 14th rolls up, I don’t even bust a sweat
    cause on the 13th she came so many times, by the 15th she’ll still be wet
    so if you’re smart, you’ll treat the 14th like good ***** and
    [email protected] IT”


    Copyright 2005
    © Ramarla D. Rozier
    Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
  2. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u made a point

    i like this alot you made a point>affection should be shown all year round not on just valentines day. because if the love is real you dont need choclates and flowers etc. to make one feel loved. i like it keep it goin! :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well verse wit a twist.....roll on !
     
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    Definitly a thinking poet's love poem. This was truely poetry in motion. Write on poet!!! write on!!!!
     
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    man..u aint neva lied on this one
    each day you should treat y our queen like the moon
    and each day she should treat you like the sun...word

    keep bragin it poet...da rhymes are tyte
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :massage: But i want some chocolates :skillet: :hearthis: Maybe alittle dollar store rose :skillet: Okay maybe just a quiet dinner with just alittle wine :hammer2: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: I just had to play with this one, it is funny to me because my husband feels the same way about valentines day and i believe that the same way i loved him yesterday could be no different for today, so when valentines day rolls around it will the same in my home, everyday is valentines day, its the bond we share that makes a day in the year seem like just another day of loving for us.

    But i do like the chocolates!
     
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    I'm going to tell you a story, for what it's worth
    build your heaven ...right here on earth

    then "valentimes day" won't mean a [email protected] thing
    if she's your "Queen" ...and you're her "King"
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW, Nicely posed Piece
    Your right, Im diggin this Funk Valentines!
     
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    You pack a mighty blow with those words poet. I always thought of the day to show you care about a loved one even more, not to make up for all the care you should have shown to begin with. Keep flowing these potent vibes poet.
     
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    Poet you spoke truth dig the vibe and the message sent in this poem flow on...Angel
     
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