Black Poetry : Frustrations

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  1. MiztikalDreams

    MiztikalDreams Member MEMBER

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    Thoughts raging
    Taking over my mind, heart, body, and soul
    Relationships outdated
    Taken advantage of
    Used by the system of extreme mind control
    Conscience ignored
    Raw emotion at the helm of a ship tearing apart the oceans of my mind

    Can I Get AWAY?

    And escape to a place to call my own
    A place where my mind can go free and roam and let go of this world of hatred and abuse
    Dedicated to myself and time itself
    To take life for granted is world's greatest sin
    Declaring the poverty of the world
    The misuses of God's given resources
    Lord take away my pain so that I can live my life
    Give me the strength to do as I please
    Not live through another's pain and strife

    Can I Have PEACE?

    Peace of mind so that I can be free
    Of frustrations that continue to bother me
    Taking over my every thought and my every movement
    Frustrations of the heart and the relationships that ruin it
    Just give me my peace that I continue to live for
    So that I may live happily without my FRUSTRATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feelin' this.............you can..........you can........... :grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    silent prayer , hope and heart of love u can !
    well felt scribe
     
  4. MiztikalDreams

    MiztikalDreams Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love ya'll!!!!!!! That's just my second poem on here!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    keep flowing looking to read more of u
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, and welcome to love...
    yes, peace can be yours, it's just a..."Inside" away.
     
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    Something we all can relate to, a place where we can just be, without worry and cares. You described this so well.
     
  8. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honey, let me welcome you here and thank you for your love and support. You have a wonderfuly smooth talent yourself and I must say that i've entirely enjoyed this piece you wrote. I'm looking forward to the rest of what you have to offer here on destee.com. You be encougraged and let the words flow from that deep well in your soul. You are beautiful and so is your writing.
     
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    i do indeed understand you on this
    yes this is a tight flow
    and yes you have release some
    deep thoughts that has
    most of us on the edge
    keep you flow coming
    stay away from the edge
    what is Frustrating today
    will be a past issue
    tomorrow
    much love to you
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight poem:wave: welcome to Destees!
     
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