Black Poetry : Frustrated

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, May 1, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feel like I'm
    In a sound proof room

    Four walls
    With no windows
    Just silence

    In a straight jacket
    I feel so overwelmed

    Reality just set in
    And I'm not having my way

    Loneliness just sunk
    In
    Desperately
    I try to defend

    Weakened by the strife
    I try to take flight

    But I just can't
    Seem to get myself self
    Off the ground again

    Overwelmed
    With this heavy load

    Cumbersome
    I was told

    Be strong
    My heart
    Is uneasy

    I'm weary trying to find rest
    This repititious pattern
    Is growing so old

    I can't really express into words
    Just how fustrated
    I'm really feeling right now

    I think the problem is me
    But the problem is you

    I feel like the guilty one
    But I'm innocent
    All to frecuently
    You change your mind

    Soundless
    Doubtless
    Retrieting
    In my own
    Categoring
    Ignoring
    While brain storming
    Where I want to go
    And
    Try to relax
    The foundation
    Is destroying
    And fustrating from day to day
    I don't know how
    I'm completely

    Fustrated!
    Fustrated!
    Fustrated!

    Desert Storm
     
  2. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm,
    I feel ya on this one. It's like you feel helpess like you can't do anything, and like your trapped and no one can hear you no matter how loud you scream. I feel ya. It doesn't seem like reality, but it is. Someday it will end I hope.
    One_Love
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    let all that frustration out
    thru your flow

    nicely done

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STORMY....

    FELT!... oh yessss....

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
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