Black Poetry : Frustrated

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lpoet, Jan 29, 2003.

  1. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JUST A VENT


    My heart sheds blood red tears
    From the very depths of my soul
    Sometimes I swear my life spins
    Rapidly
    Wildly
    Out of control
    Every morning I wake up to the
    Sight of more hair falling to the floor
    My life has always seemed so loud
    My screams,
    My heartbeat,
    My breathing,
    All I ever wanted was for things
    To calm down
    Admittedly I’m lost
    But cant honestly say I want to be found
    It’s just something I get out of this
    Grittin my teeth and
    Beating my fist
    Closest atheist
    Long ago I replaced faith with this
    POETRY
    Is this who I am or have I not become
    Who it is that I’m destined to be
    Searching
    Hopeing eventually the answer comes
    To me
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lpoet...

    You can vent here all you like...we here at Destee are your crutches...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo l

    i can get with this cause sometimes i wonder y i even bother to get out of bed. then i think hell i may as well get up get out and get something. trust me you are not alone and like Q said vent all you like cause through your vent you may be helping someone to cope :)




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  4. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It aint always easy to do what we do on the daily. Whenever in doubt, let it all out!

    ...with your pen mashing against paper.
     
  5. OLMEC

    OLMEC Active Member MEMBER

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    Hold Tight L.Dog!

    I'm feelin you!...This poetry grind is a micky ficky

    KEEP MASHIN' (ala Sis. Steele)

    Yo! Sis. Don't be suprised if you see this in a poem of mine. LOL

    PEACE!
     
  6. Blkthunder

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    I feel you..."Who it is that I’m destined to be? "
    First the question then the answer
    Seek on...
     
  7. halle24

    halle24 Active Member MEMBER

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    Really good piece. Especially for just a vent. Keep it up Aaron. Make sure to tell me about the next thing you post. YOu know i always enjoy reading your work. When you gonna give me some love poems. You just been writting dark pieces lately?
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow. Writing does soothe the soul at times. I won't sound redundant and echo what has already been said so I'll say "I second that." There's much love in this house to get around to everyone and every situation. Be strong. The answers will come you just have to make sure you're ready to receive them, feel me? Keep writing lpoet, continue to share pieces of you.

    blak
     
  9. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    up
     
  10. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *here i am
     
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