Black Poetry : fruitless

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hadassah, Apr 25, 2001.

  1. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    he spills his seed
    on unholy
    ground

    while her green
    pastures
    brim with the
    life stream of
    cooling waters
    deep enough
    for drink
    everlasting

    she mixes the
    cleansing potion
    of vinegar
    to purge
    her pools
    of hope

    to calm
    the
    undercurrent
    the
    incessant
    whirling
    he
    begins

    when he leaves
    her soil
    moist & tilled
    but un-planted
    still

    & elsewhere
    spills his
    seed


    hadassah
     
  2. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you present

    stark images for my mind, ms. hadassah...

    ****!

    thank you

    Cela
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful. The words are working in this piece Hadassah. Thank you for sharing.

    BE
     
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    VERY TOUCHING BEAUTY OF WORDS DESPLAYED
    LOVIN' IT.....
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...when he leaves her soil moist and tilled..."
    such a memorable phrase...so rich in texture...so soft in grain

    I am really enjoying your work poet!!

    continue to spill your moisture on the page

    With you...there is never a dry moment

    *fertilizing*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was displayed awesomely from a fruitless view.
     
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    love the flo in this one flow on poet.
     
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    Im feeling this poet
    This is hot poet
     
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