Black Poetry : FRONT PAGE FLOW.. enjoy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 18, 2007.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am going to run back old school. Some of the members who have been here a few years have used and seen this style and creativity. I am sure they recall this flow technique. The following drop is from today’s titles. I want to thank the artist for the drop. I am using your titles and all credit for this flow goes to you.

    IF YOU LOVED ME – Peachislove

    CONFUSED – Thatgirl74

    A REASON TO OBSERVE DECEMBER 25th – River

    After the Game – Miss Lady

    Thank You Sister PLATINUMILLITY1 !!! - Destee

    TV fathers??? - dustyelbow

    Spirit Soars - Roxanne

    Videos: Banks helping parents become better... - dustyelbow

    Grads find job market tougher than job counselors... - dustyelbow

    No doubt this soars and when our-doors this kill... - rhymebad

    She Makes Me Soup - waynethomas

    Are You Pretty with no Makeup, Weave, Wig, Perm ? - Destee

    This and That - PLATINUMILLITY1

    Thinking. - thatgirl74

    "A New Year: A New Beginning" - Aaliyahmonet

    The Sun Kills Them - Destee

    do we embrace white people? - jamesfrmphilly

    Things That Makes You Say Hummmmm -Zacharias

    Butterfly Wings and Petals - watzinaname

    Poet of the week....sista PLATINUMILLITY1 - $$RICH$$

    U.G.L.Y - MetaSaience

    Are Osiris/Isis the same as Nimrod & His... - Verbatim

    Happy Birthday Sister Deepy!!! - watzinaname

    SILLY CHICKS - Miss Lady

    I Don't Care About America - Miss Lady

    WHAT IS LOVE? - Miss Lady

    Sound Off - HopelisRomantic

    It Ain't REAL... - 1poetsought

    Should you care or do you chose to ignore( not a... - nevar

    MY HOT CHOCOLATE FIX - garlicsalt99

    The Perfect Storm ~ - 1poetsought

    State The Obvious - Da Street So'ja

    Rip My Clothes Off - FattnBeautiful

    Can Black People Afford To Do Without Money? - kemetkind


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    Baby.. I was THINKING

    Everything could be different if you let me do my thing. I know how you feel when I am always out there hustling, but… CAN BLACK PEOPLE AFFORD TO DO WITHOUT MONEY?

    Listen I am not just speaking just to move my lips,

    SHOULD YOU CARE, OR DO YOU CHOSE TO IGNORE me again?

    This year is coming to a close. My hope and wish is there will be “ A NEW YEAR: A NEW BEGINNING “ for us

    I agree with what you are saying and I am telling you. I can change. I don’t want to be one of those TV FATHERS

    But I am going to finish this game I am watching. We can talk in more detail AFTER THE GAME

    Don’t question WHAT IS LOVE

    Love means different things, and different things, to different people.

    I think i STATE THE OBVIOUS

    Hold on… hold on… the phone is ringing.. give me minute baby. Why you say that?

    That is U.G.L.Y

    Let me answer this. You know I am expecting a call from my sister.

    Hello… who is this? What are you trying to sell me? I am busy and I am expecting a family member to be calling any minute. I am not interested…

    “ ok, sir may I send you… " VIDEOS: showing how BANKS are HELPING PARENTS BECOME BETTER……click….

    I have no time for that!

    “ Who was that? “ I know you get calls from these SILLY CHICKS

    Baby that was somebody trying to sell me something.. dang!

    I DON’T CARE ABOUT AMERICA and the false hope these banks are putting out about this sub_prime loan crap!

    I have NO DOUBT THIS SOARS, AND WHEN OUR DOORS are being flooded with junk mail and stuff…THIS KILL ’s me.

    Offers coming in talking about college and the whole controversy that GRADS FIND the JOB MARKET TOUGHER THAN JOB COUNSELORS try to make it seem.

    IT AIN’T REAL !

    Folks debating religion and asking questions in surveys talking bout… ARE OSIRIS.ISIS THE SAME AS NIMROD & HIS…..

    Baby those are THINGS THAT MAKE YOU SAY HUMMMMM

    But you act like I hate everybody… and everything. What you mean?

    DO WE EMBRACE WHITE PEOPLE?

    Well it ain’t funny but…THE SUN KILLS THEM

    They swivel up like BUTTERFLY WINGS AND PETALS

    I am not CONFUSED!

    I know .. I know.. I shouldn’t be talking like that.. Ok.. baby come here sit on my lap.

    Give a big Kiss! Smack. Hummmm

    This is the close of the year and we do have A REASON TO OBSERVE DECEMBER 25th


    It is Christmas and it’s my sisters.. “ ring.. ring… “ let me get that.. Hello…

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY SISTER DEEPY!!!

    Who is that .. in the back ground.. Oh.. man I forgot

    THANK YOU SISTER PLATINUMILLITY1!!!

    Thanks for our holiday gift and well wishes.

    Ha..ha..ha.. I love it. Hey.. I heard you dropping some great flows down at the club

    Flowing about all kind of things like THIS AND THAT

    and they nominated you

    POET OF THE WEEK….SISTA PLATINNUMILLITY1

    SOUND OFF .. one for me.. you know I love your poetry.

    You know that flow you did called.. give me a minute… Oh yea

    SHE MAKES ME SOUP

    “ whisper.. whisper…” Sorry Deepy.. Platinnumillity1.. my lady is whispering in my ear and she is creating “

    THE PERFECT STORM ~


    Bye….Gotta go… click!
    Its on now girl… let me turn this game off.

    You ARE… YOU ARE PRETTY WITH NO MAKEUP, WEAVE, WIG or PERM

    When I am making love to you baby... my SPRIT SOARS…..

    You are MY HOT CHOCOLATE FIX

    Quiet…boy … IF YOU LOVED ME
    Like you say you do

    RIP MY CLOTHES OFF

    :bullseye:
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HAHAAHAAHAA.......You are Silly HODEE
    Cool Rhythm Brother!
    and you even noticed her unflawed beauty...LOL
    Keep Flowing Bro!
    P.s. Thankx for the shouts!

    :10200:
     
  3. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    THAT'S WHAT'S UP ^^ I LIKE......
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi HODEE
    Wow! Very cool. This is awesome and creative. Flow on

    Peace~N~Love
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee, I thoroughly enjoyed the way you laid this all out. I couldn't wait to get to each line to see how you'd pose the next title. Thank you!!!
     
  6. Zulile

    Zulile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unexpected!

    HODEE :D

    I really enjoyed this creativity! the storyline! how it all came together! :great:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great creativity movin in stride ....wow movin poetry flowin
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    no i think you provided the flow

    HOT HOT HOT
    very creative

    yea mama would be proud


    peace
     
  9. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that was really cool and creative. I really liked this. Cool write
     
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