Black Poetry : From Friends...To Lovers

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  1. brichejo88

    brichejo88 New Member MEMBER

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    This is juss a poem I thought of when I was thinkin a/b that special someone...I'm an amateur at this && I only write like this if I'm really feeling something...sooo, tell me what u think!!♥


    In the beginning we were real cool

    We were the best of friends

    && Still are...I might add

    But now...U && I are beginning to feel something

    Different

    Something never felt between the both of us before

    I know sometimes we both try to hide it

    But I can tell that the Feeling Is there

    I can tell by the way u stare @@ me

    But when I look back @@ you...you turn away

    I can tell by the way that

    Whenever we see each other, we can't stop

    Smiling

    Even tho we both try our hardest not to

    I can tell by the Hugs you give

    Sometimes holding on longer than usual

    && sometimes wanting to exhange those hugs for

    Kisses

    I don't understand it tho

    Because I didn't expect it to be you

    But they say what u least expect

    Sometimes is the BEST thing for you

    I will no longer chase those people that don't have a desire

    to be with me

    because I kno that if i continue to do so

    I will end up losing someone that was worth

    Keeping

    Instead, I will focus my attention on those things that truly matter

    && I know that all that matters is

    Me & You
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have to be friends for a relationship to last anyway. When friends turn into more, what a precious gift that is. Wonderful write, and welcome to Destee!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one friendship turns to courtship for a divine relationship ...

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to da house of peace & respect
    welcome from above blessing u wit love here
    welcome brichejo88
     
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