Black Poetry : From Darkness :(

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  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A prisoner of darkness
    A slave to my Inner me
    Burden on my heart
    Ready to be set free
    Here in the darkness
    Weighing down my soul
    Surrounding me
    Hindering me
    Blinding me
    These walls of darkness
    Not allowing my eyes to see
    Oh how I long for the light
    To shine on me
    To set me free
    To release me from
    This darkness inside of me
    Oh light please rescue me
    My soul
    My mind
    My heart
    All long to be........................free


    :heart:Please pray for me:heart:
    Nita
     
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    Hi Nita,
    In the realm of where you're at (inner) should be the brightest light in the world. Where else can you go for comfort from the world ? Just relax and open your spirit up instead of your eyes.
    your spirit is ...YOU...
    the 'darkness' can never blind you...only you can
    nor can the 'brightness make you see...only you can
    so step back in...use your spirit...it's there for you...to :bowdown: to your every need.
    luv you...queentswana
     
  3. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    thanks queen,
    felt your word right here :heart: ...I needed a lil encouragement and hope because the devil is steady tryin to test me...smh
    I took what you said to heart, really, thanks sis so much..I love you too:heart:



     
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    as sure as the morning dew...
    the light is strong within you :heart:
    one love
    khasm
     
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    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I looooooooove your poem I am so feeling this. Wow this really hit home.
    I absolutely love it
    Great Job
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dew????

    ummm khasm...QQ'n do I lQQk like I'm in a field, running buck nekked thru the flowers and dew??..smh....lol...naw I'm messin.
    Yeah, the light is strong, but sometimes my heart's eye is jus not open to see the True light...Thanks 4 encouragin, and being there for me ...your truly a wise king.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mannnn...

    You guys really know how to be there in the time of need...I was feelin kinda bad, but my spirits have been lifted...thanks so muc :)

     
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    Love this poem
    posed well and strong...
    within is the light
    i have been here
    knowing this i can relate...
    within sista friend
    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)


    I know I can count on my sisters :wink:
     
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    In prayer we can discover so many things, including that light that leads you down he right path. I'm feelin you here, and I hope that light guides you soon. This was emotively put.
     
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