Black Poetry : From Chardonnay

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as I lick
    the remainin'
    chardonnay from my lips,
    surprisely
    I began to reminisce
    about the many times
    my friend and I
    casually kissed
    just then
    it dawned on me.

    "I kinda enjoyed the
    sweet taste of his lips."


    I don't know why,
    but It seems like
    lately~
    every time I gaze up
    into the blue sky,
    I remember how
    he and I would sit
    and chit chat watchin'
    the sunrise and set

    I swear
    each time I hear
    that song he sang
    softly in my ear
    I simply grin
    and think,

    "how romantic"

    if I didn't know
    any betta~
    I'd think I'm fallin'
    for the brutha
    or~

    perhaps

    I'm simply havin' a
    chardonnay moment.


    Scribeaboutit!
    It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is coool
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one shall never forget once i've touched the soul wit dis song !
    hehehehe!!!
    really dis vision of love is da thang called daydreamming!
    what a way to see him
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sherykah,
    You be killin' me... :laugh:
    Thanks for the love sistah. :)

    Shaz,
    Thanks for reading me. :)

    $Rich$,
    Day dreaming....I like that
    Sounds like a nice piece. :)

    Yall the love is appreciated
    and returned.


    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel u on this one..
    U know the truth..

    :) ;)
     
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    After a few chardonnays...
    anything is possible....hee hee
    I love how you...entertained the thought..nice piece!

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Coco~

    Were you drinkin while you were writing this? lol Im really diggin this one hea ma!

    Fall in Sober
    Reas
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    misty,
    I'm glad you could feel me. :)

    Epiphany,
    I'm happy you enjoyed the read. :)


    Reas,
    (with fingers crossed) I swear I only had one sip. :laugh:


    CCBSkYN :heart:
     
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    lost in the swirling mist of emotions
    as chardonnay strips away inhibitions
    letting lose pent-up desires existing
    deep in the chest that has risen
    pushed up by the heart beat...beating
    singing the song of love's believing
    lost in the swirls of emotions
    i offer this one my devotion.

    chardonnay...i take thee.:)
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sherykah,
    There may have been a smudge
    on my contact lens or glasses. :laugh:


    Baller,
    Love your replies...
    this piece taste like,
    "some more" please! :wink:

    Thanks for the flow.

    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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