Black Haiku : From afar…

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  1. angelicsage

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    Wow, SAGE,
    that was soft and beautiful......effortless
     
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    THE SECRET STORM...

    Yes together ...you breath as one,
    for he now has two hearts...and you have none.

    Soul of your soul ..he has taken this space,
    for what he has given, cannot be replaced.

    When you travel through the storms of this world
    he'll be waiting for you...his precious "Pearl"...​
     
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    Reaching out to touch
    But can't yet reach that feeling
    The fear holds me back
     
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    uncertainty ruled
    we were prisoners of our doubts
    fear trumped our feelings

    then we took the risk
    we each took a step forward
    overcame those fears

    love had awaited
    to our delight, in each other
    now we sing the joy
     
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    The stairs of doubtness
    is now conquered by the joy
    of taking love's steps

    Reaching the level
    of delight in harmony
    and continuing
     
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    Powerful Words...I like it...I like it ...A Lot :toast:
     
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    Breaking free from fear
    I saw it in a vision
    Just the two of us...

    We were together
    Destiny had called for us
    Our time had come

    With joy, I held him
    In peace, he held me
    Forever, we breathe...as one
     
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    the fear...gone away
    we both took steps, together
    rooted in our love
     
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    Love finally blooms
    When it is given the chance
    to breathe on its own
     
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