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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by choclatangel, Aug 2, 2006.

  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sky was beautiful before the rain came
    My tears came without warning or heed.

    They flowed from my eyes until a river formed
    When I saw the river I laughed at myself.

    That's when the lightening flashed
    My anger was quick and yellow white hot
    Fast to lash out without a care.

    I wanted to hurt you 'cause you hurt me.

    I sat down and thought about what happened,
    Your opinion and thoughts of me do matter.

    But on that same note we are both grown
    And what I chose to do in my life is for me to decide

    Hopefully a rainbow will form and the storm won't be in vain
    Maybe we'll be friends again this time without the rain.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm sure it will come again within da rain and feelings of sin
    this was tyte i hear ya ....flow on choclatangel
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    choclatangel:
    Very nice write.
    Much Luv
     
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