Black Poetry : FRIENDSHIP & LOVE /LOVER & FRIEND

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    We more then woman & man
    we like sweet lovers to befriend
    things we did and do
    made us complete just two

    Never cross to be more
    til da day you seattled da score
    it was like a hurting encore
    wonder what all this for

    betrayed da friendship wit one click
    feel da love but something just flip
    now hit wit a crazy whip
    M.I.A> one musta dip

    Hurt & pain been calling ya name
    what a mistake, one didn't claim
    but drifted off to another aim
    who is da real blame , blame !

    get a grip / move on
    time to stop this sad song
    yep! dat friend sho nuff gone
    was it love or just night dinner

    who is the victim, who da sinner
    friendship & lovers /lover & friend
    mix emotion or just a game
    both a month later is now past shame

    can't let go wanna play
    but dat friend has left da hey
    blocked off what a way
    to say bye bye babe

    no words not even a call
    better wake up before one fall
    deep in a trend of pitty patty bin
    time to move on d......m !

    Game ova 2 ta 0
    please stop let it go
    friendship there's no mo
    foolishly one startin to glo
    no no no i better stop da flo

    No-friends
    never lovers
    just a woman & a brother
     
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    Asomfwaa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hotep!

    You sure massage the hurt. :)

    Careful with your talents; you might make someone want to fall out of love, just to re-read this in the moment. ;-)
     
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    My dearest $$RICH$$,

    Give it time. Things will work out just the way they should.

    (smile)
     
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    So many get it all twisted , mixed up and try to hold on to yesterday
    use today as a game and forget about tomorrow and how to just move on !
    sleep walking ......

    I believe that it will bring change when one move forward out the shadow of the past

    I say all this from a thinking tank and listening to someone twist a friend mistake
    like lovers and the ship that sail away !
    who fooling who or is it just a continue game of tag .....

    Thank you both for the visit inside my mental that spoke out loud .......
     
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    I read more than the poetry folders here, Precious.

    :heart:

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    wow really ......what ya get from it as u read deep into it
     
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    A lot.

    (smile)
     
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    That's what it boils down to! You lay it down so elegantly!
     
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    thank you ......sometime expressing it can be whewwwww!!
     
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