Black Poetry : friendship ever changing

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  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    our friendship
    ever changing
    moods rearranging
    tap dancing on what used to be
    getting that daily fix
    just chit chatting with you
    and sometimes
    when i close my eyes
    i can see you
    your pretty dark skin
    the way you laugh out loud
    the brightness of your eyes
    the intensity of your spirit
    the broken piece that's in your heart
    but me and you, like a glue
    we manage to hold strong
    and days when we unravel
    i panic
    feeling lost without that
    bond
    when it comes to you
    as bad for me as you are
    you are also good for me
    as much as you fulfill me
    you have the ability to leave me empty
    i try to control my love for you
    but i'm in denial
    like an addict that says its under control
    and i know i need to let it go
    but maybe tomorrow
    after a little more changing
    a little more growing
    a little less denial
    i won't close my eyes
    and picture you
    your pretty dark skin, the muscles in your chest
    the whitness of your teeth
    the tatoos on your flesh
    and wish you would love me
    the way that i love you
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice, taking us through changes!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well posed u took it their and back
    tyte
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poet, rich - thank you...it's been really hard for me to write these days...i don't think i've ever been stifled for this long...today i felt a little something...so i put it on paper. not being able to flow is very scary for me...so wish me luck!
     
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    Redlady, feeling your flow on this......
    {and wish you would love me
    the way that i love you}

    This was heartfelt, nice flow.
     
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    Hey redlady
    wonderful scribe
    feeling all of this
    Peace
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage, bluewater, thank you for feelin' my piece...i feel as though i'm taking baby steps right now.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed sistah the magic of the hand will return
    the mental mind will see in vision
    ya soul will feel the desire to flow
    we all shut down at some point and rethink the mission
    this piece was ya start to recovery
     
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    Mmmmm...how this rings so tru
    thank u poet...just...thank u :)
     
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    :toast: YOUR WORK IS EXCELLENT--AFTER READING, I FEEL AS IF I HAVE MET A NEW FRIEND. THANKS FOR SHARING:)
     
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