Black Poetry : friendship and sexual tension

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Nov 6, 2002.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i talk to you as a friend
    but i’m thinking about sex
    words come through your lips
    your eyes describe your thoughts
    your hands make movements of description
    but somebody write me a prescription
    because i’m talking to you as a friend
    but I’m thinking about your sex
    you’re talking and i’m talking and we’re hearing each other talk
    and we congratulate one another on our accomplishments
    but I’m thinking about your thrust
    and i’m thinking about your tongue in my mouth
    giving up words from your lips
    receiving sounds in my ears
    and i hear oohs and ahhs and moans and cries
    cause you’re projecting and I’m receiving and the tension is so strong
    this conversation is hours long and did you just mention sex?
    we smile, we skip it, we change the subject
    hell, let’s talk about DMX, or Bobby Brown and how bad he looks
    or favorite meals your mother cooks
    just to keep the real thing at bay
    i want you and i don’t want to say
    that i want you - badly
    cause only you can relieve me the way that you do
    you do it so well, but we’re not supposed to talk about that
    i’m talking to you as a friend.
    but i'm thinking about sex
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** red this is hot and true to da dayyyymmmmmnnn bone!!!!

    been there done that!!!!!!
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhh...yeah.

    nice drop hun.
     
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    yes! yes! yes!

    this was tight redlady

    priceless :)

    pd
     
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    sometimes ot be like that...and I know where you're coming from...
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Klabarron, thank you for relating.
    Lili, glad you were feeling it.
    J'hiah, I'm flattered
    poeticdelight, I appreciate the smiles
    Bishop, thanks for the recognition
    I do my best to put it down the moment I am feeling something, and this is what came out
     
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    felt this completely, but I am sure that he would greatly appreciate it if you would speak your mind. and relieve the stress on his mind, cause he is probably just trying to respect what he thinks are your wishes
     
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    redlady...gurl I'm feelin this piece here!! I was/am in a situation like this and it manifested a piece I wrote called "Tele-Gumbo".
    Gurl, the final decision is yours but you should be honest about your feelings. I mean, what's the worst thing that could happen?

    hot read red!!
     
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    well...well...well...reddy. can't say that i haven't been there. hmmm...now, which head is it they say a man thinks with? {as visions of DA BOMB sinks into your mental}.:)

    love the way you flowed it, reddy.

    THANKS.
     
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