Black Poetry : Friends (yeah right)

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  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Friends
    Yeah right
    Friends don’t do what you did
    Friends don’t leave you empty handed
    Friends don’t lie
    Friends don’t intently make you cry
    Friends don’t be there for you only when they want to
    Friends are honest and true
    Friends keep your darkest deepest secrets
    You can give them your heart and they’ll keep it
    And they’ll return it in one piece
    Well, I gave you mines
    And you returned it sliced and diced
    Not once but twice
    Left me on the side of the road
    Lonely and cold
    And had the nerve to use the word friend
    Called me your friend
    Think again
    You use what you knew
    To chew me up and spit me out
    I wish I knew you were about
    Lies and deceit
    I let you mistreat me
    Thinking I had did something wrong
    When all along
    You would verbally abuse me
    Apologize then use me
    Waited until I was down in the dumps
    To tell me my friendship you didn’t want
    Friendship don’t end for no apparent reason
    So apparently this friendship ended
    Cuz you wasn’t my friend in the beginning
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MAN! Who did something to you? That's real, some "friends" will leave you high and dry. I'm digging this piece here!!!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin' ya on this!
    I think you're in the right
    place to make some good
    poetic friends...
    Peace and friendship!
     
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    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can relate to ur poem uniqueone i realized it and moved on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed friendz like dis who need 'em
    the so call friendz will cross u every time
    well felt
     
  6. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel Ya!!!

    I can certainly relate to this so true......

    AqueenPassing
     
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