Black Poetry : Friendly Lust

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Jan 23, 2004.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sweet sounds of a southern humming bird
    play as I lay here in all my thoughts of you
    I imagine those hands I know so well
    running through my braids
    making its way to my face
    guiding it to meet your lips
    for a kiss that only lovers know
    How slow we move
    as my imagination leaves all that is reality
    My body needs to know you on a deeper level

    Take me there

    Where passion knows no restraint
    and love knows no denial
    I have nothing to lose
    but myself enveloped in you
    Is our friendship up to the challenge?
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umph, loved the way you brought us there to that question. Great flow.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da beauty in it is that da answer is yessssssssssss!!!
    tyte drop ladybug
     
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    great flow ladybug
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    enjoyed the sweetness of it.... :angel1:
     
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    THE question...

    Many say that intimate relationships destroy friendships, but true friendships can't be destroyed by anything, U just learn more about each other by taking that step.

    Nice.
     
  7. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I :heart: this. I use to think that a "realtionship" would ruin a friendship, but I've done it and like PositiveMinset said it should onl make a realtionship stronger. And if it doesn't maybe the friendship wasn't as good as you thought. Needless to say I'm feelin you.
     
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    Lady Bug YOU ARE SERIOUS! Luved it!
     
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    Sistergirl..."Ladybug"...
    you took my mind and heart
    on a journey...I won't quickly
    forget...love feeling of "real"
    when you spoke of his hands...

    ...take that step sister...sounds like
    it's the only choice... :wink:
     
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