Black Poetry : Friday night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gempis, Sep 8, 2003.

  1. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I call you
    like I always do
    before I come over
    sound of water
    when you pick up
    "I'm in the shower"
    you say and I laugh
    but a half hour later
    I unlock the door
    same sound of water
    I push my way
    into the bathroom
    you are still in the shower
    oh
    the look you give me
    when I lean in
    and see your
    beautiful brown body
    I am instantly wet and
    I'm sure it's funny
    how fast I disrobe
    and leap in
    urgent pressing
    slick body ecstasy
    breath catches in
    the kissing
    squeezing
    in and out
    in and out
    the water is getting cold
    the water is getting cold
    so??
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum. just beautiful.
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.....what a "TGIF"..........redefined and refined by
    our poet of the week "Gempis" :toast:

    I like it...alot
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well i be
    this was awesome tyteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    ya'll was in der too long :laugh:
    tyte scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
  6. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Ewww weee, this is hot!
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love, angelic, $$RICH$$, Khasm, sudden, THANK YOU. :grouphug:

    Before this site, I have never posted work where others could see and comment. So to get this kind of response means so much.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u are a very talented gifted poet and it sho through ya work
    honors given as due ........
    flow on poet of the week.
     
  9. LibertyLady

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    Oeps ................
    got it .....

    Brrrrrrrrr MMMMMMM Brrrrrrrrrr MMMMMM Brrrrrrrrrr MMMMMM

    This was a hotti..
    and it got me....
    hihi..

    Love L
     
  10. j'hiah

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    the shower thing :jawdrop:....
    :lol:@khasm...

    this was too sultry....
     
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