Black Poetry : Friday Night Heaven

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NittyGrit, Dec 12, 2001.

  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sultry swaying hips
    briskly tapping toes
    syncopated dips
    performed by dance floor pros

    can I have this dance
    girl looks at him
    tales of lost romance
    in the form of ghetto hymns

    whatch ya'self!
    you ount know nothin' 'bout that!
    somebody call for help
    he 'bout to through out his back

    captivating lyrics
    everybody's song
    elevated spirits
    dancing all night long

    speakers thumping loud
    bodies snuggled near
    under the noisy crowd
    sweet nothings in the ear

    hundred degree heat
    still nobody stops
    got to move my feet
    and feel the body rock

    you talk about Friday nights
    I'll say Heaven on earth
    you talk about enjoying life
    I'll say for all its worth

    NittyGrit01
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm Hmm...That's Right!

    Nitty,

    This stunk of ATL mos' def!!! :cool:

    Dug it like that!!!

    Peace/
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed nitty

    sho nuff on point on da real!!!
    feelin' dis
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo Grit

    out in the club
    rub a dub
    sip a bud
    for a night be the stud

    see the one
    grab a hon
    get that bell rung
    to the morning sun

    out on the strip
    you the man - you it
    don't forget the survival kit
    Peace to ATL Peace to Grit

    >DSSNY<
     
  5. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as if...!

    you gotta enjoy this...
    life

    smooth flow~
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love

    the syncopated rhythms of this rhyme. "Heaven on earth"....yeah, "for all it's worth".

    thank you


    a
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nitty

    you just described just about every dance hall in Atlanta..... yup you sho did!!!!!!!!!!! Dug this all the way and oh yeah it's sho nice to read you again
     
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