Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Dec 7, 2001.
all hell yeah!!
see dis what Rich be talking bout here
the street life of a so'ja indeed laying laws
and another one and another one and another one and another one
Another gifted twist, makes me ask the question "What's it all really about?"
has a vibe of expression and city street life
"The annals of life spent mostly living to work
For the truth we search
From birth to the hearse
Enter in the hospital, exit in a church
Lifespan of an individual for better or for worse"
Life in it's totality. Interesting, when put in so few words makes it seem so rapid and brief. I agree with emax, very thought provoking.
Keep on throwin' it out there.
loving this and that second stanza
i hope my destiny will be for the better
**** that wasreally tight truthful with a flow also loving this keep on dropping you really should drop alot more kid nice
let the river flow.
Again, you have written
a thought provoking piece...
time on this earth is short...
each is givin a calling
no matter how mi-nute
if we go thru this life
not havin made an impact...
not havin made a difference
with all the money, talent
and resources....to produce change
then what do we profit?
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