Black Poetry : Fresh In My Mind

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Sep 5, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a storm from some year
    That an older generation sits and reminise about
    The love i felt for you stays on mind
    So clear
    I can still feel your lips on mine
    And the look in your eyes
    When I said I loved you
    And you continued to ride
    Trying to moan
    An, "I love you too."
    But you couldn't quite get it out
    Because the pleasure had over taken you
    The feel of your big strong arms holding me close at night
    As we lay on wet, stained sheets
    Just basking in the light
    Of each other's love and protection
    The way you ran your fingers gently
    Across the vast dessert of my flushed skin
    The way you said my name when you called
    And sang on my voice mail
    Made me smile
    The way we played Connect 4
    On the floor
    Infront of the fire place
    Brings a smile to my face
    Also
    When I try to tell myself
    You didn't love me
    You were only out for self
    But it hits me that you did
    In the only way you knew how
    We both acted like a spoiled kid
    I see that now
    You wanted things your way
    I wanted them mine
    Neither one of us wanted to listen
    Just listen
    To the other
    But if we had maybe
    We could have salvaged
    This love that was so
    D
    E
    E
    P
    I drowned in you
    And I'm still there
    Floating around somewhere
    Underneat all the baggage
    And s*** that you keep bottled up
    You said remember the way
    We made Love
    And I do
    Every single day.
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww....dammm that struck a soft chord in me.......I'll be back later...I just have to go get some tissues.....this was such a beautiful flow girl....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was on hit so gentle and beautifully pose'd
    u can speak to my soul anytime
     
  4. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so SWEET... (snaps)... paints a realistic vision of love.....I like it.. FLOW on !!...
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SwT... thank you so much for the luv. I'm glad you felt me.
    $$RICH$$... you don't know how much that invite means to me LOL Thanks
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you SUNkissed. I'm glad you liked it
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl this was so beautiful.........now I know where your name comes from...
    it's perfect........for the perfection of love poetry you set before us

    I truly felt this.........the emotion simply swirled down the page
    radiating as I read...........I absorbed every word! Encore!
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed reading this
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice True Love. I really enjoyed the read.
     
  10. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage...that is such a humongous complimet coming from you. thank you soooooo much!
    mzblkangel...i'm glad you enjoyed it.
    Hodee...every compliment you give to me goes straight to my heart. thanks so much.
     
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