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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Mar 30, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You came with nothing
    Yet you brought everything
    You had no history
    But all of love's knowledge
    No baggage
    Just experience
    No stories to tell
    You only spoke of life
    We said hello
    It was on

    BE
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE,

    I couldn't have said it any better...

    "God bless you...."

    Thank you for BEing! :)

    A

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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat

    I felt like I was there. Thank you for sharing this beautiful memory.

    this right here ~

    "You came with nothing
    Yet you brought everything"

    I especially love that because now see how all someone, THE ONE, need ever do is come just the way they are ~ bringing the purest stuff. Their 'everything'.

    :wink:

    T
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    T

    You understand where I'm coming from wit this T.
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is outstanding

    like T, I felt like I was there as well. Many lines have been written about the glory of that first meeting; those first impressions...and all the firsts that came thereafter. I've enjoyed reading them all. Ms. A sells herself quite short, however. Her perspective would be a wonderful read, indeed.

    Very concise and beautifully rendered.

    saleem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that was so on point BE.........
     
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