Black Poetry : freezin' rain..(stubborn love)

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he weeps for her beauty,
    gentle as a rose
    pourin' down his face,
    like flows of heavenly gold....
    a rush like heavy adrenaline,
    nothin' could ever be more betta-than,
    me n you
    committin' tha seventh sin...

    and he knows the out-come,
    about love,
    and its fee from all tha things
    you get your doubt-from...
    always hard to maintain,
    but humbly-her voice keeps tha moment jumping,
    joy is slowly pumping,
    through our young hearts-
    like blood through veins...

    and changin' this emotion could cause a heartache,
    so he,
    turns her presence into an essence
    more severe than any heartbreak...

    sometimes, our young n stubborn minds,
    can lead to this devotion..
    no peace promoted-
    its that just love wants its part in our seas n oceans...
    and maybe the breeze will hold it,
    like mother nature frozen durin' a seasons change--
    to walk into tha light,and only get,
    the sensation of freezin' rain.......:(
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis path i've walked before ........love can do dis to ya !
     
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    **** this is sounding like love and war
    poet

    yeah wit love it's trying to love without getting your heart involved


    DSS
     
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    oh yeah!
    this is waaaay hot...
    thank you.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANX FELLAZ....
    JUS SUTTIN I WROTE A WHILE AGO...
    ---AND YOUR WELCOME WILDFLOWER....:)LOL
     
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    ...i enjoyed the read!! thank you for sharing. & the
    title... "freezin' rain"... i am diggin' that... with 2
    shovels!! :) 'scribe on, poet... 'scribe on.

    itsallLove, chile!

    elayne.
     
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    tyte piece poet.

    he weeps for her beauty,
    gentle as a rose
    pourin' down his face,
    like flows of heavenly gold....

    joy is slowly pumping,
    through our young hearts-
    like blood through veins...

    I love those two bits the most.
    Like Elayne said good title.

    Keep postin
    *Emma*
     
  8. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANX LADIES---
    'PRECIATE DA LOVE!!!
     
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    i love the first stanza

    "he weeps for her beauty,
    gentle as a rose
    pourin' down his face,
    like flows of heavenly gold....
    a rush like heavy adrenaline,
    nothin' could ever be more betta-than,
    me n you
    committin' tha seventh sin... "

    "CATCHING" :toast:

    welcome :wave:

    pd
     
  10. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx luv.......

    so far im feelin evryone on this site--
    da love hea is real........mad props to evry body doin their thang...
    AND SHOWIN LOVE....

    ill be droppin some more......
     
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