Black Poetry : Freeze Tag Lover

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by icandi, Apr 6, 2004.

  1. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    huh, he looks so good
    i remember the days when we used to play kick ball
    in my front yard
    freeze tag with the other neighborhood kids
    i used to always get tagged when he was it
    cause i knew even back then that i wanted him
    i wanted to share my life with him
    and i know he felt the same way
    see cause we kissed at age 10
    and he was my boyfriend by the end of that day
    he told me that he loved me
    and at that moment i was hang gliding beside cloud 9
    cause he was my man
    and then a few years later... after we turned 12...
    that n i g g a moved on me
    and i hadent seen him since 6th grade
    But now im 20
    and yes time has passed
    but that little boy i knew back then
    is now a fine a** grown man
    he is single and so am i
    he is in the navy and i yeah im willing to make a move
    cause he told me he has been searching for me for so long
    and wants to make me his thats if... im willing to make him mine
    so i thought it over and asked my mom what i should do
    and now we are in a relationship that i told you i knew it would happen
    cause way back then when i was just 10
    playing freeze tag with the neighborhood kids
    i used to always get tagged when he was it
    and maybe now i will get tagged and it will be forever
    and now i call him my freeze tag lover
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done sistah
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freeze tag lover ?...now that's to cute :laugh: ...but...
    He's free, Your free...what are you waiting for ? 10 again ? :lol: think of all the "LEGAL" tag you can play now...and if he tag you right ??? from then on it'll be :luvv: in the air , :luvv: on the ground...you'll feel that :luvv: when you're sleep, you'll wake up in :luvv: ...and beleive this, you won't know if your comming :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: or going :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll:
    thanks for sharing this beautiful reunion with us.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved the way you put this together, and the story here is so sweet and warm. If this is true, good for you, you never know what may become of it.
     
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    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful

    I WAS JUST
    IT MADE ME FEEL SUNSHINE
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ffeeze u it... cause u droped a nice flow here. Tight lil sis do that poetry thing! :rolling:
     
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