Black Poetry : ??? freestyle warm up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Jul 30, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is there women for a man
    whom seems destin to be alone
    Is there shelter for the stray dog
    whom knows the alley as is only home!

    See these are question that I must ask myself
    now that theres know you.
    At one point everything seemed all together
    Now I dont have a clue!

    Awwwwwe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    They told me to have hope
    Hope... Hope.... Hope.....,
    I got it, and things havent changed
    They told me dont loose faith
    Faith.... Faith.... Faith
    I fondled it and it still continued to rain
    They said trust love
    Love.... Love.... Love
    Tried it didnt do me any good
    Hope, Faith, and love
    Got my heart solid like wood

    See I was in one of those relationships that seemed for the better
    I mean........ it was better than being single
    But now Im like Carl, And, I WISH I'D Never Met Her!
    She made me look to things that I'd never look to before
    She made me believe in love, but it was my love she chose to ingore

    She told me to have all these things and good things will come
    I scooped them up held them proud, only to watch her turn and run
    She took my hope, for a........ hope you find another lady
    Took my love for granted started playing me shady!

    Once again I failed to look before I leaped
    My lady promised me something that she knew she couldnt keep
    She told me to have hope that things would always be good
    She said keep the Faith and Ill be back, But I wish I could!


    Unfinished
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Brother...

    don't be teasin me like this...
    I'm feeling this flow...
    you've been on a little haitus...
    Glad to see you back...
    feeling the flavor beginning
    to unfold...
    allow it to burst forth
    I'll be looking for the "river"...
    of verse...

    Peace & Love,
    Sage
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks coming from a talent like yours, means a lot, Ive tried to add a little to it but its still rough
    Ive been laying low trying to get RIGHT TIGHT ect.

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey now u still bring it deep tyte and heavy
    lovin da flava happy to be reading u again
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was striaght. i enjoyed the read.
    glad your back poet!!!!
    come join us in chat tonight
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    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So that's just a warm up huh? Well, I'm scurred of you then. Having a love gone wrong makes you not want to try again. Goodness knows, I know. This grabs your attention, as per your usual. Great to read you again.
     
  7. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks, Thnks, Glad to get back
     
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