Black Poetry : FREESTYLE Warm UP#2 Unfin.

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im trying to get back into it bare with me !!


    Love lost but know love gained
    Just wasnt a fair trade
    I gave everything I had
    Only to watch you leave me like this

    I gave everything I had only to watch you leave me like this.......................

    And she said............

    See your right you gave everything you had
    Only to watch me leave you like this
    But when I told you I wasnt taken it anymore, did you think it would persist

    Did you really think lying about those numbers and lipstick on the collar was doing me any favors
    Did you really think that your Babies IM SORRY was going to give bitter a
    different flavor.

    And did you really think that since you told me you love me
    and I was your wife to be
    That I forget about the underwear I found in your back seat.

    See thats the problem you did everything just to see me walk away
    Except give me respect, and honor the few things that make a women stay

    But yeah you gave everything, now look at me and my new Brotha
    And everytime I seee you
    You got that look on your face like.............How could she love anotha

    But its not love its revenge
    And screw your pitty party, Ive came to my end
    The end of my rope, understanding, trying to make it better
    Sorry bro you stand in the rain
    You asked for this stormy weather.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribing from da freestyle side wow!!!
     
  3. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truly diggin this piece bruh! Keep scribing.
     
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    It does sound like he was asking for it, you laid this straight, as always, tight piece.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THNKS, ALL
    Had to come back to the Fam to try and get the creativity back
     
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    yo that was fiyah right there...
    it seems as if your creativity neva left...
    one love
    khasm
     
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