Black Poetry : freestyle..untited

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 17, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now its dying…
    The pain inside
    Tryin to climb
    Cant reach the top
    Half way and slide again..
    Clouds cover the sky..
    Feelin like I am high…
    I be da low rider in da wind..
    I face the pain and deal with the hurt..
    But once upon a time
    This lime was bittersweet
    Listen as I speak….
    I know I am a treat..sweet and meek…
    Moved my soul engaged in my heart
    Intertwine in my mind…
    Like a butter fly
    I flew…just to be with you
    Memories Flashbacks sets my soul
    On fire…then you say ya wanna
    come back step over as I go under
    my life don’t fit you….
    I escaped what was you. I got someone new…
    mesmerizes my soul and holds my heart
    and caresses my mind..traces my being and
    lovin me…then you spilt this lame game
    just realize ya lost a dime….
    I be the black pearl of his world
    The Essences of him….
    .now as you try to define this rhyme
    lol ya taught me
    how to hold my head up
    and be down with mine…see I was
    listen when ya thought I wasn’t….Peace :nono:
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes you definitely are a treat.

    It's a trip how people want what they can't have, but when they have it they don't want it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said the true emotions droppin here
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset..all so true...thanks fo da love


    $$RICH$$ thanks fo da love on dis...
     
  5. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...this is mad real mami....i'm lovin how u flowin with this...
    and i can completely relate to whut you sayin......

    onelove......
     
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    EXpressurself Active Member MEMBER

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    you truly are a talented writer..again another beautiful piece :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You use words like a sculptor molding clay. I guess in life we have to learn how great we are regardless of who else knows it.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LURK..thanks for the love and support :angel1:

    Olakuoto and EXpressurself thanks fo da love...just love to write thats me

    watzinaname..my sister thank you thank you..your words touch me..
    much love :angel1:
     
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