Black Poetry : Freefalling

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  1. 1svd2srv

    1svd2srv Member MEMBER

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    You said, "Fall back into my arms and I will catch you."
    Freefalling like liquid gold being poured to form beauty, glimmering so bright trusting its total release of it's impurities. Not caring where I land yet know if help is needed you will give a hand to break my fall if my wings don't open thru it all.....all the "hell" and the rain......the heartaches and pain.......it doesn't matter you will be there before I hit lifes wall.
    Freefall. ....falling into your arms feeling safe from harm knowing there is always a place of security even if I don't feel free......I'll freefall because I know without "sight" that it will be alright to just let go and soar. Expanding from where I am stepping out with no doubt and trusting. Yes trusting, in the unknow of where this will take me. In the unknown of what I can't see but yet see. Yes the unknown. So I'll walk to the edge of the ledge and close my eyes.......that rope that I once tied a knot in, the one I was always told to hold......it's time.....now.....to let go....and just FREEFALL!!! And so at the end of the cliff....the one thT held me, the one that had me hemmed in, the one that caused me to never win......it's time.....and so I step......closer to the edge I go....I leap.....releasing all and now......I FLOAT!!!II'M FREEFALLING! !! I'm taking that chance at romance and taking part of the unknown. And now I see those words you whispered to me was everything I needed to simply........freefall.
    You said," Fall back into my arms and I will catch you."
     
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    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    nicely done.
     
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    Sister Poet 1svd2srv,

    Lovely.

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