Black Poetry : Freefall

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Froggy1, Jul 15, 2005.

  1. Froggy1

    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ill admit
    I have skills and wit
    with my punchlines i know when to hit
    but are mine too complicated for some?
    cause I separate their hand from their bum
    and get them to think
    instead of letting their body sink
    into their couch
    while sipping on a juice pouch
    most rhymes I create
    are for fun or to educate
    but theyre only heard by a select few
    like an ancient mating call
    the listeners stall
    im getting tired of waiting for them I cant take it yall
    im ready for that freefall
    into the abyss
    see if im someone anybody wil miss
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lyrically blazzin freefall
    tyte vibing the scribe
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some pieces are hit and miss. This is a hit falling into the dephs of the endless abyss.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes many hear, and don't let on that they do. You never quite know for sure how many the words have impressed. Keep the flows coming.
     
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