Black Poetry : freedom part I

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Aug 14, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    freedom
    wat is it
    one word
    but that one word stretches lengths threw the souls of us all
    it stretches our limits to wat should be endless possiblities
    freedom
    wat does it mean
    will its true meaning ever be acheived
    they (WE) faught too
    hard to still be lacking the way we do
    was it all jus a game
    did the folks who died
    for my (OUR) freedom
    die in vain?
    did they....
    did they........
    wat is freedom?
    freedom?
    yo- do we really hate our country
    as much as our enemies
    have our dreams for a better ameriKKKa
    turned into envious hopes of living outside the picture
    intead of within its red paint.....
    lets jus think....
    they (WE) faught to hard to (have) die in vain....
    die in vain.....
    freedom wat is it............
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FREEDOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM! SPEAKS
    from da tongues forth of our ancestors
    thy forefather's whom died for our freedom
    wat is it ......is it in vain
    are we freeeeeeeeeeeee somebody tell me
    while i'm on my knees

    tyte freedom flow to hearts cross Amerikka
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    liking ya style...
    i hear ya questions
    thought provoking as well
    Nice drop
    Angel
     
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    You brought this straight, yes, what was it all for? Tight piece.
     
  5. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnaks family.. its mo to come ...the saga continues
     
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    Strong powerful message!!!!
    It's time to take the stand
    from where our ancestors
    left off!!!!

    Keep on spreading the message!!!!

    Tyte Drop!!!!!!!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One poet to another
    Freedom choked
    Another brother
    Great question,
    No romancing...
    Daroc,
    Got the answer

    GREAT WORK!
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh yes...
    the many definitions
    of freedom...for it is
    often something very
    different for every person...

    Love this flow!
     
  9. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Big ups

    I am known to fall in love with a poem, in a matter of words, when it is voicing something that I hope anyone other than me, has thought of. That poem makes me feel at home, because those questions in that poem have in turn, now, become my questions. Big ups man, keep up the work, beautiful :read: :shades: :grouphug: :wave:
     
  10. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks poet... angelicsage
    and welcome prizefighter... wlecome to the family.. hopefully u'll drop some love here... and show destee some too.... enjoy ur stay at this wonderful hotel fo a while........
     
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